Bro do Barabara. I have never seen a fanfic w Barbara.

I honestly thought the same, but it seems fine for now

Luv it, I will say by giving Yufeng the dragon bloodline she will probably turn into a heaven defying genius which is cool.

Yo check out this new fanfic that I just uploaded: Common Sense in the Wizarding World Marauder's Era SI/OC https://***.fanfiction.net/s/13791036/1/Common-Sense-in-the-Wizarding-World-Marauder-s-Era-SI-OC I want some feedback and would really appreciate you guys checking it out.

I dont really like Yufeng as a love interest because of how her character is portrayed in the original book. Sure she is pitiful but at the same time she isnt innocent. Also I just feel like her having kids the same age as the MC isnt good. And you are right that u don't have to take everyone from Yun Che's harem, but some of them deserve better endings. Also I would love for u to recommend another fanfic ATG that has the same depth as urs. I can guarantee that there would not be one like that. Anyways I would prefer it if they stayed close friends rather than love interests.

I honestly still think its too early to assume she will be a part of the harem.

I agree with all your comments, but at the same time lets calm down. I'm sure he is not the only author on the site who dropped his novel after getting money from it. I get that it was irresponsible of him, but he is a teenager so you can't do much.

Looking forward to the rest of the novel. I will say that the family is ****ed up.

plz beat teiko

You should have made him leave after beating the three. Like he said there is no point in him staying there and he would be monitored rather than being able to do what he wants.

How can he resurrect her if they aren't in the same world? Also I do agree with the no harem part. Maybe instead of resurrection she is also reborn into another character.

Great Chapter. Looking forward to more. Also First.

Good story, thx for the effort

Honestly, I really liked the fanfic. It's just that once you think about it there is literally no impact of Reese on the world. He just exists there and helps the events move faster.

Dude please don't make this a harem fic. The Gwen x OC thing is real and there are already way too many thirsty people on this site. It would also be really weird if he went from a loyal husband to someone who gets two wifes. Either way its ur story and I'm looking forward to more chapters.

Your grammar is decent and I commend you for that but please use more periods.

I look forward to ur thoughts for Shun's last year. Good luck and i'll continue to keep up with the daily updates.

It would be cool to see Shun fought over by Prestigous Schools. Idk how I feel about Shun being in a new high school if it does happen.

I like the party system if he only pairs up with his most trusted people. Not just random strangers.

I love the pairing just hope you don't make it harem. PLEASE!!!!