The part were Ren is mean to Kevin for being cringe is cringe itself. It looks so forced and it's not even funny (for me at least). His overreacting to something so little. Sorry Author, I didn't mean to be rude, I'm just stating my opinion. but this one isn't really cool.

and another thing. even if monolith is indeed stronger, why would they throw the potential of having an ally to not anger their enemy. He either loss or be a bigger loser. he loss way less if he agrees and loss more if he did what you said. just as Ren said, he would be a demented person for him to refuse.

I'm also annoyed that the other race are called as sub-human.

Kevin: Ren come back to Konoha with us!

Ren be bullying the father and daughter.

"And that is Ren × Kevin is canon."

removed? I thought his just gonna disable the tracking device? unless I miss a part. Mr. Author, would you kindly explain why it's changed?

okay, everyone in the schemes is an award winning actors.

info dump is not really good. would have been better if you slowly dump this info slowly and not in one go. or you could summarize them and later explain the details as story progress.

Also remove the "son" part. It does not sound natural. Mother don't call their child as "son"(I never heard someone call their child son). They usually call them by their nickname(like sweety or baby) or their actual name.

Oh you tsundere

okay I understand now, I kinda still don't understand why change it from one to more. But thanks for the reply.

what I'm talking about is the demon contract. but okay 👍

before it was one contract per demons, now it's depends on the rank, this change makes it too convenient. Now I feel like a change will happen for plot convenient. I hope this is the only change that will happen. To many changes and it will ruin the story.

Angelica Route Unlocked!!!

So is Kevin not gonna help Emma?

thanks for the chapter!

Now I wonder if Emma and Amanda will get their own 5 ⭐

Thanks for the double chapter!

Just Monica