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What happened to Omni-directional movement lv0?
Lucy baby, is that you?
OMG this line made me turn away and spit blood.
The mouth watering and saliva running was a bit too much. It makes him seem insane/psychotic, unless that was what you were going for with his character. Something better would be”his heart raced with excitement, a smile stretched across his face”.
It may have had a slower start than is usual for a webnovel, but as I read I loved it more and more. One way I determine if a webnovel is great is if it make me feel attached or emotional towards the characters. When I got to the parts about Helen I felt like crying. If this novel can keep up this is going to one of my favorites.
Truck-kun, the most deadly assassin in the multiverse.
I think I read this somewhere. What quakes are called are relative to the planet(or body) they are on. So on mars it would be called a marsquake.
I can picture him standing there bleeding saying ‘tis but a scratch’