geoslim21
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geoslim217mthCommentedonly watched episode 1 so far will probably bing it next weekend while dog sitting.
(A.N-; Anyone watched the live action of One Piece released on Netflix today. Damn it was good.)- geoslim211yrCommented
Please tell me his dad is not named Bruce
Nathan's reminder of his family's wealth hit Vincent like a ton of bricks. He forgot that Nathan was none other than Nathan Wayne, the son of one of the richest men in New York. - geoslim211yrCommented
realist hero. that is a harem and the mc already got married and had kids (in the novel)
His identity is that of the main character from Saekano. Tomoya Aki, the harem protagonist of the show, and of course he was dense like any (every) harem anime. Although previous Seiya only remember his name and wasn't much friendly with him, the transmigrated Seiya loathes this dense MC. - geoslim211yrCommented
um where is the rest of the chapter?
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shadow clones are a B-rank technique in naruto
(A/N: Seriously, if you actually know how shadow clones function, you would very quickly understand why it's a bad idea. Shadow Clones are just a lazy gimmick that invalidates real problems since EVERYTHING can be solved if there are enough people working on the same thing. The only way Shadow Clones actually work is if the Author completely ignores the logic behind the skill or gives the MC some bogus way of ignoring the severe detriments. There is a reason why it's an S-Ranked skill in Naruto, and there is also a reason why every fanfic that relies on that type of mechanic dies out and gets dropped. The story quickly becomes uninteresting when Shadow Clone Jutsu is the literal solution to every problem (O',....,'O)~! I could literally write a 5k+ word chapter explaining the detriments of the ability, so stop spamming it in the comments as if it's an actual solution without thinking about it.) - geoslim212yrCommented
like others I like v2 more. while the first 15 years were rushed it is understandable why since there really wasn't much that could happen other than growing up and training. wish there was more detail to the training though. I would like to see more detail on his travels and maybe side chapters showing his family after learning about him leaving and Amber and Qrow discussing Jaune after she left the village. Can't wait for the official start of v2 though
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I say leave it. I may not usually be a fan of stories with Salem as a romantic interest but I really enjoyed this story and how you handled her before. Can't wait to see what you do with the new version.
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yup (I know a lot of people don't like how bi tch y she is early on but she is one of my favorite rwby girls)
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this is the second time I have read a series where cellphone was translated as handphone. this is also the only time I have seen the use of this term in this story
"Yea, it’s an urgent express air delivery from Western China. I had personally flew an airplane to receive it, and used the fastest speed to send it to you, Student Shuhang. I hope I didn’t hold you up?" Sima Jing took out a delivery as big as a handphone box from his bosom. - geoslim212yrCommented
anyone else think a railing that low is dangerous. I mean that is only a little over a foot and a half high and seems more like a tripping hazard than a safety precaution.
The height of the male’s dormitory second floor was three and half meters, and adding the half meter high railing, it was four meters high. This black figure did not even require any assistance and had effortlessly jumped onto the balcony from ground level. - geoslim212yrCommented
I find it funny that you can get away with censoring that word by censoring the "i"
Sunshine guy looked at Song Shuhang beside Soft Feather and was instantly depressed. "The girl is already taken. Damn*t!" - geoslim212yrReplied to geoslim21
ok no author note but the "swipe left to continue" is the only thing on page 33
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I will admit to skipping over most of the stats but you are right that people are exaggerating how much space they took up. on my phone (galaxy note 9) the chapter is 33 pages and the stats start on page 3 (though his name is the last thing on page 2) and they end at the bottom of page 17. a total of 15 pages exactly (plus one line if you take into account the name at the end of page 2). taking into account the space for the chapter title, author note, and the vote and comment buttons at the end i would say nearly 50% of the chapter was stats
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AO3 and Fanfiction DOT net are sites you can post stories and are quite popular. AO3 has some good filtering options since it is the only site I have found that let's you sort out what kind of pairings you want to read in the stories you read (m/m, f/f, m/f, multi)
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