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kissmebad8dCommentedCh 22 You've Got The Wrong Ass- kissmebad9dCommented
Totally agree with you! How does that make a girl go bursting with laughter? like for reals.
Finding her answer hilarious, Ortega struggled to suppress a laugh. "That's funny, because I was thinking the same thing!" He grinned, "Brace yourselves for the emotional rollercoaster ride of justice! I am Emoti-Cyclone!" - kissmebad14dCommented
now we're talking! fufufu...
Apart from being startled by the accident, a slight brush of his crotch against her round, perky backside made his face turn red with embarrassment as he failed to keep the reaction of his lower region at bay. - kissmebad14dCommented
lol ... u better not. screw all the ladies instead ! give me moareeee!!!
"I'm the only guy in this entire company... Damn! Guess I better not screw this up," he muttered under his breath, feeling the pressure. - kissmebad14dCommented
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"As the managing director, I am pleased to offer you the job. Congratulations! Your work will begin in a week, and I would like you to report to the cubicles by then. Is that taken?" - kissmebad14dCommented
lol... acne our old friend [img=faceslap]
It seemed it wasn't ripe yet and he only succeeded in making it bigger. - kissmebad14dPosted
author really needs to work on making the narrative more compelling by doing more of showing and less info dumping! though the grammar is impeccable and conversations between characters are well fleshed out, I feel the story could benefit from more character depth, especially from the MC. Ortega seems a bit too basic to me ... overall it's not bad. highly recommend for urban lovers out there