Congratulations! I really loved your book. But the deal was that William must give half of the money to the charity..

really nice..

Great going.. Keep writing man..

real nice.. carry on buddy ;)

Enjoying .. Carry on ..

Like this part while he almost forgot to use the password..

He is gonna start all over again...

How cud they do to William, he is only 9 !

Feeling sad for him.. but its time to grow up.. Revenge

wow.. very interesting plot.. nice going baby brother...Good writing Darpan.. way to go..

how did u became homeless?? u have plenty of money/ machine dont u??

need to buy more staff from the inventory..

buy some mana/ powers... level up man..

Pick 1..

already liking it..

like the term political marriage.. William has big way to go.. lets see what happens next.. loving it.. thanks bro..

Tanx man..wonderful and creative writing..

Really find the story fascinating and interesting.

waitin for William to grow up! findings the story is nice.. keep up Darpan.. good job man..

The story board seems nices.. it has a steady pace.. Its enjoyable to read.. Lets go with this journey of new thoughts :)