So are you going to separate his personality completely after his rebirth in Marvel or are you going to make his wives comment from time to time on what he does and whether he will bring a new wife to their group because I have seen enough similar novels that bother me very much and I do not want to see another one. Will he be completely separated from his previous life or not? This is a genuine question.

Do you understand the meaning of no harem? In the first chapter, the protagonist talks to his wives/more than one wife or lover is considered a harem wherever they were in the past or the present, and this is more than enough for me to stop reading it because I know that you are planning to add a woman from the MCU to his harem from Naruto And One Piece, I don't know who the last one is, but that doesn't change the problem. At least I brought you the evidence.

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Five out of eleven reviewers did not read your novel and gave you five stars, what rubbish.

There is a tag that says no harem and in the first chapter there is a harem?? What are you doing, buddy? You contradict yourself in the first chapter

Frankly, the novel is a little confusing: 1- You realize that the protagonist is considered a blank sheet of paper, and this means that he does not have any kind of feelings. So how does he feel fear, anxiety, confusion, and guilt because he killed people? These feelings are present in us, but if he does not know that what he did is wrong, then how does he know the Feelings appropriate for the situation, etc. Have you seen a young child having an identity crisis? No, because he does not know the meaning of identity, and the protagonist is in the same situation. :2-If the protagonist of the novel is a blank sheet of paper, he will cling to the first person or thing connected to himself, in other words, the malevolent shrine, and he will listen to it because it is the closest thing to him and the first thing he contacts instead of resisting and fighting it .:3. How does he know what money is?: 4- The reaction of any living being, even if it is small, is to protect it self. Why did the protagonist didn't try to protect himself when the thief struck him? I do not want to rate this novel because there are not enough chapters to rate it, but take these points into consideration because I will take them into consideration when I evaluate and rate the novel in the future.

It's been a while since I last read this novel, so I forgot what happened in the novel, but I remember that the focus of the novel is a copy of the original story, and the biggest problem for me is the bullying. I hated the character of James Potter in the original story, and the writer built the character of the protagonist of the novel as an exact copy of him. After he entered school, before entering school, the character of the protagonist of the novel was well built, and the protagonist of the novel was also addicted to magic, but after entering school he became stupid and childish and entered Gryffindor instead of Ravenclaw. Collect all the chapters of the novel before he enters school, collect them and throw them in the trash because building the character from the beginning of the novel is useless if you are going to change his personality by 180 degrees after he enters school. Sorry, but his personality changed in one moment as soon as he got on the train.

Yup . You lost me in this chapter. Instead of building friendships and giving him the book as a gift, the hero of the novel becomes a Psychopath and decides to enslave the characters in the novel. I can tolerate the stupidities in the previous chapters, but this completely ruined the novel for me.

1. Continuity in the novel is intermittent. For example, when the hero of the novel begins training his assistants, he finishes the training, and everyone he trained has become masters of the technique in which they were trained. The novel is an expression of a beginning and an end, and there is no process in the middle. The novel makes you feel that it is a summary more than it is a novel. 2 The gender of the protagonist varies from one chapter to the next, sometimes male and sometimes female. 3. The hero of the novel does not have an important presence in the novel. His mission is to defeat powerful enemies to show his presence in the novel and to talk sarcastically about his character being cautious and that he wants to live in peace and prosperity and problems come to him. This is all I have about the hero of the novel because there is nothing else about him. 4 The translation is bad In the details and there is no editing. Overall, the novel is considered third-rate. Frankly, it does not suit me. The theme or idea of ​​the novel is good, but the execution is very bad. If you want a similar novel but it is better in all aspects, you can search for a novel called (Vongola Primo in One Piece).

He's supposed to be in Ravenclaw

Are you serious? The protagonist loves magic and studies it even in a world where there is no magic. Because the protagonist has the talent for knowledge and old magic, the hat sends him to Gryffindor. Dude, read the original story or watch the movies before writing fan fiction.

Here is a hole in the logic of this fan fiction. In the original story, the students are arranged in alphabetical order of the family names, the protagonist Jonathan Blackwood begins his family name with the letter B and Hermione Granger's last name begins with the letter G The protagonist is supposed to be before Hermione Granger and the others like Harry Potter etc.

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I have read longer than you. I have reached chapter 48, and to be honest, the novel becomes worse. The hero of the novel becomes childish, stupid, and a bully to the point that I do not want to read this novel anymore.

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The novel is very good, but the childhood period is kind of annoying, especially when the hero of the novel is kind of arrogant. I wish I could give him a fistful of love from One Piece.

Magic is supposed to be unreal. When you set limits to magic, you are setting limits for yourself, your imagination, and the imagination of everyone who reads the novel. The beauty of the Harry Potter story: 1: We, as readers of the book, do not know everything in the story, and this ambiguity makes the story suspenseful. 2: There are no limits to magic. Spells do not have limits, but rather depend on understanding the spell, control, and experience in using magic, will, and feelings. Feelings in particular increase the power of the spell by a large factor, and there is a difference between the feelings of love, anger, sadness, fear, and happiness because magic does not work on realistic logic, etc. But when you set limits, you must adhere to these limits, and suddenly magic is no longer magic, but rather science. My look at magic in Harry Potter 1: As the wizard increases in age, his control over his magic increases 2: Magic increases in focus with the wizard’s experience. Example of the difference between Gilderoy Lockhart and Severus Snape. Snape can kill Gilderoy at any time he wants, but Gilderoy can erase Snape’s memory. Why is this? The difference is because Snape is a fighting wizard and Gilderoy is a trickster. Do not forget that Gilderoy erased the memories of many wizards in his mission to become famous, and those wizards are not weak at all. Both Snape and Gilderoy Lockhart are magicians who specialize in a specific field and they excel in their field, although I hate Gilderoy Lockhart. I must admit that he is a master of memory magic. The more experience you have in using a particular magic, the easier and more powerful it becomes. 3: A person’s will differentiates between one person and another, and the will is what makes the magician exert his power on reality. The spell is merely a guideline for the will to apply the power to reality, in a sense. The last magician bends reality according to his desire, but it requires guidance, focus, and will. That's why I don't like the limits you put on magic because a teenager defeated the Dark Lord because his will to protect everything he holds dear is stronger than his opponent. In other words, Harry's power increased at that moment and returned to normal after his victory. This means that the magician's power fluctuates according to the situation.

My friend, my problem is not with the hero of the novel, if he is stupid, then that is part of the novel. My problem is with Professor McGonagall. She is known for her strict adherence to laws and rules, and you're telling me that she accepts the protagonist's request to become a professor in this way. There is a point I forgot to mention. The background of the protagonist is unknown and he is not registered with the British Ministry or any other ministry around the world. In other words, the protagonist does not have identification papers or identity cards. This may not be a problem on a normal day, but when he applies for a job, especially on an education site in a famous school because children are dealt with on this site. Tom Marvelous Riddle was rejected three times because Dumbledore suspected him of being a dark wizard, which is just a suspicion, but the protagonist is completely unknown. If he was a professor teaching Defense Against the Dark Arts, I might accept him because this teaching site is just a decoration that changes every year. I am not telling you to stop writing this novel, but I hope you take into consideration the points I mentioned. The novel is good, and I will continue reading it. Can you make the novel’s hero take his position seriously? The novel’s hero does nothing all week, even though he is supposed to have class every night Per week from the first year to the seventh year.[img=Feeling it]