100% chat gpt

Yeah this character is retard in my eues but good luck with your others fics

Chaos being afraid of the fates? Are you dumb?

That's what get imagination to run wild does it not? Staying with something akin to cannon is not always a good thing.

Did this became a crack fic?

You should try getting a beta for the fic.

nah like less stuff with him in it? like trying to branch some side arcs while the cannon unfold a bit in the sidescreen? for example he could try to go to the europe side of soul society the witches and all would be fun

You should start developing the story more at this moment all you're doing is dragging it. Thanks for the chapter.

Your otaku simpiness is showing author.

What a waste of time

I'm sorry but the indecision behind the pairing just killed it for me. for f sake stop going around it, you should have Sticked with Allison at the start and be done with it. that shit of throwing Olivia povs was another turn off, well I wish you good luck in your future works. but I won't be checking any of it see ya.