The story progression is really nice, looking forward to seeing more of Cirdan, he strikes me as an intriguing character. You said you like writing Sephora more, Why is that?

Knew it was Cirdan behind the piano

The trouble kid..

So far it's been beautiful, the storytelling, writing style, vocabulary. The introduction of an Elf? That's exciting, a twist.

That'd be really nice.. if you could.

Oh the details!!!!

It's really nice and the choice of words were spot on, the plot and storytelling is really good too, the character have nice names too 😆.. looking forward to more of your work..