this is gonna be good!!!

Sorry for the typos. big fingers and small keyboards don't go well together.

I really love this story, but these last few chapters have been really short and not really much progression in them. ..203 was really just about them landing the chopper. It doesnt even feel like a chapter. This should have been included with 202 and ended it there. Chapter 203 should have picked up from this point. This is just my thoughts on it.

I need more..lol...

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

This book keeps me in my toes. definatly should be in everyones list to read.

I wishbi could just go buy the whole book off the shelf somewhere..wait times are killin' me. 😆