DaoistJCJ2Nu
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DaoistJCJ2Nu20hCommented*fast or *quickly, not fastly
Seeing his physical attack didn't work, He was about to use his technique but suddenly he felt a sting pain in his back, Eli rubbed his back and realized his back was scratched by its nail and blood bled fastly.- DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
*Clothes, men don't wear dresses. They might wear dress clothes, but not dresses.
Asher Eli and Lilith walked on the empty streets while both of them wore matching dresses and walked hand in hand. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
"We're just getting started"
"We just starting" Eli said with a dangerous smile. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
wait and get to know each other
"I wanted to wait and let each other know better but I can't. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
*How do I leave then?* but even that's a strange sentence
"How should I go then?" Eli said with a little annoyance. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
clothes, unless he's cross dressing
"I can order a dress for you?" Lily said she took her own phone. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
*also sipped their green tea
Eli looked at Lily and Adria while sipping the coffee and like that Adria and Lily also did the sipping their green tea. In order to avoid any drama, Adria put a spell around them so that no one could notice unless they are Emperor Rank cultivators. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
Also, not "and like that", use "likewise*
Eli looked at Lily and Adria while sipping the coffee and like that Adria and Lily also did the sipping their green tea. In order to avoid any drama, Adria put a spell around them so that no one could notice unless they are Emperor Rank cultivators. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
*While sipping his coffee* or *while sipping coffee*, not the coffee
Eli looked at Lily and Adria while sipping the coffee and like that Adria and Lily also did the sipping their green tea. In order to avoid any drama, Adria put a spell around them so that no one could notice unless they are Emperor Rank cultivators. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommented
First sentence is so wrong
Eli looked at Lily and Adria while sipping the coffee and like that Adria and Lily also did the sipping their green tea. In order to avoid any drama, Adria put a spell around them so that no one could notice unless they are Emperor Rank cultivators. - DaoistJCJ2Nu1dReplied to DaoistJCJ2NuCh 22 New Mastery
- DaoistJCJ2Nu1dCommentedCh 22 New Mastery
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*no matter who you are, no matter what you are
Eli doesn't like being misunderstood and being after a girl with cheap tricks, he hated those kinds and said straightforwardly, "Tsk, If I really wanted you, No matter who are you? or what are you? you cannot escape from my grasp. Don't get full of yourself little girl" - DaoistJCJ2Nu2dCommented
*If I already knew
"Whhaatt, what you mean I know already? If I know why would I come to you?" she said with ignorant. - DaoistJCJ2Nu2dCommented
*what do you mean
"Whhaatt, what you mean I know already? If I know why would I come to you?" she said with ignorant. - DaoistJCJ2Nu2dCommented
*knowing less
"You don't know need to know everything, sometimes knowing lesser is better..ahem..well then resume your work" the senior said with a tense face and left to work. - DaoistJCJ2Nu4dCommented
chapters so expensive
First Act 48: The Sun 5 - DaoistJCJ2Nu6dCommented
pov changes have been interesting but this is getting excessive
"What do you think happened here, Charlotte?" - DaoistJCJ2Nu8dCommented
*you're
'Especially that girl I know your super-hot and all but aren't your clothes a bit to revealing? Did you combine your lingerie and dress together?'. - DaoistJCJ2Nu11dCommentedCh 72 The Abyss of Despair - Four (IV)