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ThirdLegSan

ThirdLegSan

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Who needs a golden finger, when you have a third leg?

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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    one-armed cripple speaking, this guy is jus asking for troubles.

    "Stay the hell away from me and my mother, or I will wipe your stupid family out of existence!"
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented
    But just as she was about to say something else, Li Jun stepped forward and slapped her across the face without any warning.
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    The Black Star Monarch
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    Bruh, it came falling down like a meteor and is still intact, how can it be useless? No suprise there tho, he can't see things for their worth, afterall, this is the guy who gave up his arm to fight a losing battle with the younger master.

    "What kind of useless treasure is this?" He frowned as he looked at the plain-looking ring. It was a simple silver band with a red gem set into it. It didn't look like anything special, and he felt like the heavens had cheated him.
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    here we go, golden finger has arrived

    Li Jun watched as a shockwave made the surrounding trees tumble and snap. Whatever it was, it had to have been heavy. Once it landed, the sky returned to its normal brightness. It seemed as though whatever had fallen from the sky had sucked in all the sunlight as it descended.
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    Sigh, widows in these novels never end up good,

    She wished her husband was still around to keep him safe. But she now hoped that the gods would protect him instead. She sat at the table with a worried expression until one of the maids sat beside her and sparked up a conversation to distract her from worrying.
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    Can't blame him tbh, He's happy for his son. MC's fault for getting himself injured

    "I will be back when it's ready. I'll try to be as quick as I can," he bowed in return before leaving. As he left the Li Family mansion, he grinned to himself happily and made his way further into the noble district.
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    cool chap,

    Ch 2 The silent beauty.
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    him rn

    Once she was gone, he opened his eyes and checked to make sure she wasn't there. When he saw the empty room, he couldn't hold it back anymore. He began to weep as tears flowed down each of his cheeks.
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    The Black Star Monarch
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    On the bright side, you still have your little brother.

    Li Jun read the words on the parchment and felt a lump form at the back of his throat. A pit welled up in his stomach, and he wanted to scream. He looked up at the tears forming in his mother's eyes and lay back in his bed.
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    No need snitch. The gold figner will soon arrive. He will get revenge himself.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    Ah, so it was true, sad.

    "I know I worried you. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to, but I'm really fine." He said with a nervous smile. His eyes fell down to her neck, where a blue scarf covered a large scar across her throat.
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    The Black Star Monarch
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    Skin like and eyes like an icy river...

    Suddenly, another set of footsteps barreled down the corridor, and a woman in a light blue dress stepped in. Her skin was akin to snow, and her hair was like the night sky, but her eyes resembled the surface of an icy river.
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    Nah, It was no dream, you were beaten by the young master n left to die like a stray dog. Oh and your arm is wounded, won't be rubbing one off anytime soon.

    A bright light faded into existence as the boy opened his eyes. Everything seemed hazy, but he recognized the ceiling. He was home; it had all been a dream.
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    The Black Star Monarch
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented

    Hmmm seems like the cliche poor mc beaten by young master opening, interesting nonetheless, nice chapter.

    Ch 1 Fate's cruelty.
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    The Black Star Monarch
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented
    "I will give you one last warning," said the noble-looking boy. "Kneel before me and kiss my boots. Or else I will slice your throat like your whore of a mother tried to do to herself when—"
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    The Black Star Monarch
    Fantasy · Zero_Things
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Commented
    "Add another body to the Li Family crypt!"
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Posted

    Very slow, if you're not a fan of super long descriptions and wordcount filler, this isnt the book for you. Author needs to work on making the characters dialogue feel natural and less robotic.

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    Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water
    Fantasy · JPNovelFan
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Replied to JPNovelFan

    After putting it through Ai checker, it came out to be over 90% Ai, and from asking chatgpt itself, it also claimed alot of the text to be its work? Author, most new readers wont be able to tell, but season readers will, these overly verbose descriptions and flowery language belong to AI, What hard work have you done? how shameless can one get

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    Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water
    Fantasy · JPNovelFan
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Replied to JPNovelFan

    You want some actual valid criticism here it is, Stop using Ai to write. Write the book yourself. there ya go,

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    Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water
    Fantasy · JPNovelFan
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  • ThirdLegSan
    ThirdLegSan1mth
    Replied to JPNovelFan

    After putting it through Ai checker, it came out to be over 90% Ai, and from asking chatgpt itself, it also claimed alot of the text to be its work? Author, most new readers wont be able to tell, but season readers will, these overly verbose descriptions and flowery language belong to AI, What hard work have you done? Lmao, how shameless can one get.

    altalt
    Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water
    Fantasy · JPNovelFan
    detail