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MEWCHAN195dReplied to Vergel_Terrible- MEWCHAN1928dReplied to Slc4free
i don't want to give you spoilers but he had prepared something that will be his armour !
As evening draped the city in shadows, Aqua's thoughts turned mischievous. "Time to visit that house," he mused, his smile as sly as a fox. - MEWCHAN1928dReplied to Slc4free
nice but he can not make him strong he can only materialize thing.. but you will find out soon that his weapons are crazy powerful
"Well, apparently, yes, they see commoners as a tool for themselves, harsh reality," Tien said, his words echoing the stark truth of their world. - MEWCHAN1929dCommented
nice name! hahhahaa
"October?" Cecil asked. "What are you doing here?" - MEWCHAN1929dPosted
So hello as a fellow writer who writes in this specific genre i have completed till chapter 15 i can assure you that the more you will read it the more you will drawn towards the story. also i like reading the other world story and good character and an interesting plot hooks you in the story... also one advice i know it's hard but yeah be a little more descriptive .. 100% i recommend the story. keep up the good work!
- MEWCHAN1929dCommentedCh 1 The Interview
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So our mc who got accidentally killed by the goddesses for looking too average now got a task to save the world...he was not granted any innate power and all but the god gave him a tool, a magical diary that can create anything he imagine.....now his task is to end this conflict also to know why sudden dungeons are forming? he created an A.I.- IRIS to help him clear the task.......... do write review and how are you feeling about it ? also some suggestion and feedback
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The characters seem to have distinct personalities and roles within the story. However, it might be helpful to provide more background or context about each character to help readers connect with them better. The dialogue is realistic and fits the tense situation the characters are in. It might be beneficial to break up the dialogue with more descriptive language or actions to give readers a better sense of the scene.The plot seems intriguing, with the characters dealing with the aftermath of a battle
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- MEWCHAN191mthCommented14. Leena [ Assistant of Viola]
- MEWCHAN191mthCommented13.Alica [Brand ambassador of Floral Corp]
- MEWCHAN191mthCommented12. Grey [ owner of floral corporation]
- MEWCHAN191mthCommentedLEONE: hmm this one also feels nostalgic. i think i have so many pussies to remember what a difficult job it is.