Melian_Laurels
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If it were me, think I'd have written something along the lines of: "He kicked a skull thinking it was a stone..." But the way you worded yours is something to learn from. It added more weight to the overall suspense not forgetting the cliffhanger that followed 🤍
Each character keep having an authentic voice. I believe I earlier read how terrains in the abyss shapeshift so that actually made this scene weave into the earlier breadcrumbs you provided but then again, could've been a dream but I suppose I'll find that out in the next chapter 🤍