Your notes in the middle are kinda annoying

I have a suggestion here, Let him travel more and experience life and different sides of it. He should definitely have a companion, not just Pokemon (well your readers here are human, so a little human interaction is required) like Viola here. And I am more inclined for him to have a female companion nearly 20-25 yrs old. Make it a little bit more slice of life with some action. Well for a Pokemon world I don't want him to get into the eyes of alliance (they will try to use him saying it's for humanity and they will through him around to do missions, like hell they even make a select few 10 year old run around a country to train them and use them later. Even team *filler* are at least 10% better than alliance). So better hide his uniqueness. Make him help people directly or indirectly.

Get him a pokeball and catch that pikachu

And why did you make those cerulean sisters look bad. Sure they can be annoying and not the best. But they are good trainers themselves and kept the position of second stop for trainers

Why did you remove Catterpie from Ash's team. Catterpie is a classic and one of my favorites of his team.

What is his starter Pokemon. Don't tell me he didn't get anything from professor Oak and pidgey is his starter..

What about Iris

I wouldn't be surprised if the Vulpix defeated Articuno. Are you all forgetting something. That vulpix cost him 500 points of karma. And think about it.. that bug like Iris's talent only cost him 50.

Are you all forgetting something. That vulpix cost him 500 points of karma. And think about it.. that bug like Iris's talent only cost him 50.

I think the elders are not mature enough to know the mental trauma they are giving Mikail by asking him to use his telepathy. They didn't even provide support even during or after the mission. But they decide that he did a bad job at this. I loathe the Author for this. Well it is something that can't be avoided, but can be avoided in this story. Mikail doesn't have to go through all this in a POKEMON story.

He should choose dawn crystal.. which can be used for ursaling/mars evolution

Why not anyone talk about her obvious resemblance with the Pokemon anime villian Jessie (Jessica). Even her background (wanting to become a nurse). Her Pokemon. Having a step mother. Everything seems to point the same