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WeavedSlave3mthCommentedThe best feeling ever
On the day of the winter solstice, Sunny woke up feeling tired and drowsy. No matter how much he tried to shake off this listlessness, it wouldn't go away. In the end, he just stayed in the bed for a while, wrapping himself in a blanket.- WeavedSlave3mthReplied to Alex_xin
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Not here, brother.
Sunny was pretty sure that his shadow was capable of much more than just being a silent follower. After all, the Spell had described it as being an invaluable helper. It was now up to him to find out how exactly Shadow Control could be of help. - WeavedSlave3mthCommentedAs the saying went, "An outstanding tree will definitely be blown down by the wind. If a tree is too tall, the winds will never allow it to survive."
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Love long titles
Fantasy Breed That Is Severely Injured - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
Ummm
After forming a contract with a human, no matter what kind of fey, even a Normal one, would possess an ability. The type of ability was most probably a species' innate ability. - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
Kinda cliched
When the copper bracelet had vanished, it hadn't just robbed his senses toward the world's spirit qi, but it had also robbed his spiritual energy. - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
Straightforward
[Near the boundary of the outer and outmost layer of the forest Creator] - WeavedSlave3mthPosted
In summary, this is a story of a thirteen year old boy who created something (which I think is a system) in a secret library, and with the goal of becoming stronger using the system he created. Strengths of the story are simple-straightforward language, simplicity of author's tone and slightly meaningful story development. Weaknesses includes the misuse of punctuation marks, extremely slow pacing, and the lack of proper characterization. While reading it, I don't feel thrilled nor can I find strong suspense but nonetheless, it's readable. In my opinion, there are a lot of things to correct. Really. I recommend it to all youngsters around the world.
- WeavedSlave3mthCommentedHopping on the wolf's back Apollo urges the spirit wolf to head towards the Afra forest.
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Yeah
"Now this is what you call attribute imbalance.....well maybe not so imbalanced" - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
There we goooo
[Creator conversion is finished you have 22 stat points that can enhance all of the attributes in your statistics] - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
Quite an imagination
In front of the artificial warrior is a beast Apollo has never seen before. - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
But why does he need to grow stronger?
•Second I need to grow stronger and increase my statistics - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
his mother not her mother
"Although we indeed failed shouldn't I at least receive some comfort from my son?" - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
I saw somebody complaining why is it a ding! 😂
[Waiting for the creator's command] - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
Wow.
On the boy's forehead, a five-colored magic circle was embedded absorbing all the magical knowledge the library has. - WeavedSlave3mthCommented
😂
Chapter 1: Mission failed successfully