he could've manipulated the water to seep under the armor but he didn't risk it

Jump Jackson wasn't something I expected to see

probably time skip; not cause I think it's the right choice but whenever I ask someone for the choice I should pick it usually reveals what I want to choose

it's a lobotomy kaisen reference, so yeah

Percy has dyslexia does he not?

big talk from the guy who can't even read right

its unmovable object lil boy

Then get back to work monkey

Overall, this is alright, the writing and story progression is so far, decent although so far it's been pretty slow pacing wise. Nothing has really been said about the designs or looks of the characters so I'm not too sure about it, and I also cannot say how well they replicate the characters as this is my first foray into Percy Jackson, which isn't exactly a good thing when reading a fanfic based on Percy Jackson, but I'd say the writing is solid; although the grammar and capitalization need to be improved at times, please capitalize nouns man. The writing does make me cringe at times, with the references and such, that I also usually don't get, but that may be a preference thing rather than an actual issue. Overall, it's just alright, for someone's first piece at least. I need would like for the story to start ramping up,with the hateful teacher or the antagonists appearing. Not that it's bad or super boring, sorta redundant is all. To say it once more, it's alright.

Couldn't even Nah I'd win to this, stand prouded to this immediately 🤣🤣🤣🤣 clean up on aisle malevolent kitchen 🤣🤣🤣🤣😭.