For side characters, maybe. But for the MC, Pavor hates the concept of love and his focus is on solving the mysteries of this new life as the 'hero', the system and the world itself.

If you read even just a little bit later, you'll know the full extent of his powers. Besides, physical prowess is not the true measurement of power, especially for a god that is not of this material realm.

I thought my paragraphs were adequately short enough, it must be a formatting issue. I write with my laptop so most of the time I dont know what they look like on mobile format. I'll try to divide them into shorter ones

The author seems to have taken great consideration on the worldbuilding and lore of this story. It was interesting from the get-go and leaves bits and pieces to ponder over as you learn more about the characters. Overall, it's a pleasant reading experience.

It's only really a shocking revelation to the king and queen because the readers already know Duke Vanus is dead, and that's also not the point of this particular scene. The point is that, as will be shown later on, the people of Erosith are very open about their feelings and values honesty about those feelings more than class/etiquette.

This isn't really meant to demonstrate how the nobility works but more of how the world around Pavor works now that he's the 'Champion of Amore'/ the hero of the story. Everything goes well for heroes and they can do no wrong in the eyes of the people. It's like an outer force or deus ex machina is fixing everything to make it all work out, even in a very 'forced' manner. It's related to one of the plot threads of the story so it's not really something I could change

It was implied when the concept of Phobodemons were first introduced

So violent to a child, wow

The word 'chapter' is still in French, you might want to edit that

Baileif is the name of the town, hence why it said 'the town square of Baileif'

It's the same castle as the one he woke up in. The appearance of monsters/Phobodemons are a common occurance and easily manifest at the presence of extreme fear. They just materialize as soon as someone is so full of dread

Besides some grammatical errors and typos, the prose is fairly well-written. The writing style is very florid and the way things were worded seems well thought-out. It's just that I'm new to this kind of formatting. It's very much like a movie/play script, so it took a moment for me to adjust. Usually the descriptions are not the ones in quotation marks and it's the dialogue that uses quotations. But it's fine, I managed to understand who was talking and what was happening after getting used to it. It's just that this—along with the sudden introduction of characters without really letting them sink in for a moment— made it hard for me to digest what's going on in the second half of the chapter. And it's a really long first chapter compared to most books in this platform. Still, I find the plot interesting and the monologue about the history of this world. I like the themes it seems to be tackling so far.

Yep, the whole nature vs nurture argument. They may be identical in nature to the original but they ultimately live different lives anyway

Exactly

But it isn't really the factors of origin that makes a human. Humanity is more than just a biological concept: it's also a philosophical concept because to have humanity is to exercise things like free will and capability for thought and critical analysis

I really agree with this sentiment. So mamy in our current population are too lazy to even think for themselves, so they just hop into bandwagon mentality to be part of the masses

Why not? Fossils are cool

The plot thickens

Pavor: These mortals should learn social distancing!