I agree the story could do with a little slowing down because there has been a number of chapters solely focused on economy/markets/gameplay but little personal details. This chapter with the son is great and would like more around the personal interactions. Sons school friends finding out Shinro is their father, how's his grandfather who likes games progressing and has he been playing on different consoles. What is his wife doing is she still working or stay at home mother etc etc. I am thoroughly enjoying this story and the actor story as well and like most fanfic reader want as many updates as you can make [img=update]