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Thirteen Hundred Million? That’s 1.3 Billion. For his first bounty that seems excessive. They shouldn’t yet be aware of his strength to post a bounty that high.
I don’t think he can be. Neji and Lee are only one year older than Naruto’s generation. Keitaro is three years old already and naruto hasn’t been born yet. Therefore he is probably closer to Kabuto or Temari in age.
The grammar is all over the place, as is the stories factual information. Nothing seems consistent with Canon details, e.g. baileys vs belli, colonel vs captain, sky gold vs heavenly gold. I like the premise of the story, however the incorrect details in the story from canon, without any forewarning or explanation has put me off. If this is a translation, the author should be noticing and fixing these issues, or getting a Beta reader to do it for them.
The dinosaur fruits come under the model name dragon for some reason. It’s the same for king and drake. The dragon fruit for Kaido comes under fish.