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ElIgor12dCommentedInb4 he is own father
Though Bruce had inherited some memories from his dragon father through a skill inheritance ritual, those memories were frustratingly incomplete. The details about his father were vague, primarily because his dragon mother, at the time of their relation, had not known the other's true identity or origin. This left Bruce with more questions than answers.- ElIgor18dCommented
ChatGPT: Generate an image of the dragon god stuck on the toilet for too long.
Like the tingling feeling of squatting too long on the toilet, those crystallized parts could only give Tiamat a simple numb feeling. - ElIgor20dCommented
Takbir!
This self-destructive Middle Eastern tactic has its origins in the hospitality of a certain Storm Titan. - ElIgor20dCommented
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Chapter 404: Error 404 (Sorry couldn’t help myself) - ElIgor23dCommentedCh 154 Defense!
- ElIgor1mthCommented
Needs editing
In the aftermath of the battle, though the team emerged without fatalities, their reserves of physical and magical energy were severely depleted. A period of rest was essential; venturing further without recuperation would leave them vulnerable, especially if they were to encounter another band of White Walkers. Only Bruce and Weima retained their full combat capabilities, while the rest of the team faced significant exhaustion, including Weima, despite her formidable draconic heritage. - ElIgor1mthCommentedCh 122 Bruce's Counterattack!
- ElIgor1mthCommented
Bruh This is where i’ve dropped this story. cringe
Three hundred years ago the DHG is founded by a certain person named Khan who also happens to be a member of the secret society of Guardians whose sole purpose is to keep the balance between the Dragon, Elementals, and Spiritual Race and prevent them from dominating the Human Physical world. - ElIgor1mthCommented
Ahahahahahahaaaaaaaaa
Certainly, I can help rephrase and correct the grammar in your text to make it clearer. Here's the revised version: - ElIgor1mthReplied to Amin_Z
- ElIgor1mthPosted
Story started great, but after first arcs author reduced writing to just ChatGPT writing. Text are lacking character development, story flow is inconsistent, dialogs are lacking, a lot of important developments are left to implications. Even character names are often confused or written incorrectly. Instead we have very verbose and elaborate AI writing to just meet word count quota. With minimum human editing. A lot of wasted potential.
- ElIgor1mthReplied to Nova_Bogatsu
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This story, despite a good narative and style, has an need for a serious editorial effort.
With the defensive and intelligence-gathering measures set in motion, Bruce turned his attention to forming alliances. The geopolitical landscape of the green forests and beyond presented few but significant potential allies: the blue dragon residing at the desert's edge to the north, the enigmatic mixed-race dragoness Weima who had recently settled to the southwest, and the spirits safeguarded by the Tree of Life in the south. - ElIgor3mthCommentedCh 384 Chapter 383: Statue
- ElIgor3mthReplied to Adrenalin_RushCh 383 Chapter 382: Tragedy
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Cuck
"Sorry about that then… I will try to not embarrass you anymore," I said.