Really fun read, I like the way you still keep mysteries and intrigue in the story, and yes the writing quality could be improved, because it does have some error's overall that could by pass by me. I'm into the gluttony a lot and could do with more information on her.

This is really good. Its funny has plot, a good mc who is driven by the basic means of revenge but its different for some reason like much more funnier and better in a way and i really wish you could make it longer or post more.