You could give her a daily summon of Gabriel from 'Gabriel Dropout' and have 'DxD' Gabriel switch between forms.

You should have her going on a solo adventure in the future for some character growth.

It's the wrong point in time to be using "weeb" that isn't a thing yet in the year you are writing

The fact that you didn't even get the street name right means you didn't even pay attention to what you wrote. Did you even Read or Watch The Harry Potter Trilogy?

Errrrr, there are no quotations in this thing, how can i tell if someone is talking or not? This reads like a list

It's the UK, so it's Football not soccer. Old time Brits wouldn't know what soccer was

You've done a fantastic job with this, congrats. I'm looking forward to what comes next. Make sure you don't burn yourself out and take care of your health. Thanks a bunch xx

Give us some more please

This is a translation isn't it? It gets more like translated chinese after chapter 5.

Give us some more please

Isn't this on Spacebattles?