I'm starting to think that most readers who review works don't know how to do so. This should be a chapter comment, not a review.

To be honest, I would be lying if I said I'm happy writing this story. With this being the third time I have tried to rewrite the story I felt the impending urge to drop it just after I released Infinite Soul Essence. It is the greatest failure I have ever created but this time, for sure, I'm sure it will climb to great heights. But the two stars will be token to its horrible start, no work of mine self reviewed is getting more than a star, except for this guy. But I thought it through and decided to try once more, knowing that this is part of a series that I planned from the first day I was introduced to webnovel four years ago. Not the best, but definitely worth your time.

Thanks for the review and I can't say if the MC is a particular character archetype just acts based on how he perceives the person before him.

I can't say I'm in any place to judge the quality of writing but for me, the fight scenes are a bit too lacking.

New readers? You do know it's the second fantasy novel behind release that witch with the most collections on webnovel

I like the fact that you like the MC but know that the anti-hero tag isn't just for show. The MC is more of a pragmatic person who does things most of the time only when they serve his personal interest and likes to go against the laws of society for the sake of the greater good. He isn't outright selfish, but can be diabolical in certain situations.

I'll see to your advice, and thanks for giving it your devoted time.

Thanks, and I hope you enjoy more of the story.

Your greatest noob right here. Just ask any questions you need and I'll come answering them right away. The story will follow the line of the original story but after the first end I'll add in some plot lines myself and in the middle of the story as well. I hope you enjoy every moment as the story moves on as much as I do and I trust you will my honoured readers. Have a jolly read.

Well it happens when you're using a Redmi 9a which brings up word suggestions after 0•5 seconds. I lost my phone a few months ago and so I'm now subjected to writing seven thousand words each day with a minimum of five hours and during midnight. I'm sorry if you have doubts about my abilities due to the review but trust it wasn't my fault. You can check out my other stories and see that I'm not lying .

Author here! I'm sorry, but if you're not ready to sit back and enjoy this story in general then I'm afraid I'm not the author for you. If you read up to chapter 3 then you might find my way of writing fight scenes quite... slow if I have to say but it won't be like that all the time and that is the main reason for my earlier warning. Background: I'll try to flesh everything thing out as much as possible as after writing and reading somewhat of some things called trash I've managed to realise a few tricks to good stories, ones that will make this worth your time. The story won't have a single particular focus and will be divided into a few plot focuses with mostly action since it's a male-orientated fantasy. Action 55% Adventure 10% Romance 15% R18 2%😄 Politics 2% and many more make up the list. I didn't intend on writing R18 anyway, it wasn't simply for the sake of the plot. Characters: I'll try to flesh out every major character as much as I can but trust me, none of them will feel like robots simply walking around in the story. There are two sides to every coin and there won't be an exception. MC: The MC is a morally grey person who has his mind twisted on achieving a certain objective. He has a code of not killing his enemies unless they violate a few rules of his. He cares generally for everyone but can kill without thinking twice about it. World building: The works building will go along with the story and the characters so you'll see and know the same thing as the characters. The story will follow a series of betrayals, character growth and development and insane plot twists. No deus-x-machina and very little plot armour. Character deaths but not frequent and much and a desire to change and grow stronger is generally shown. Sorry men of culture but I'm still a bit inexperienced when it comes to certain matters. If you're a lover of slow-burn romance packed with action and adventure then this is for you and if you couldn't get through the first three chapters then I'm sorry.

I'll do both but everything will be based on points from the game. So it will be more like an extension of the actual story.

You should be honoured if you get to see this. Seventy percent of the cast are yet to .