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Daoist_FG_007

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New to Webnovel. I am currently writing a novel and plan to post it in a few months.

2024-01-10 JoinedGlobal
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0072mth
    Posted

    It started out as a good novel. But now, there's barely content being added every chapter. The chapters are short and they feel like something made by ShatGPT. Most of the chapter is describing what the characters are thinking while the actual plot progression amounts to barely a few sentences. I feel pity for anyone paying for privileged chapters. Not worth it IMO.

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    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0072mth
    Replied to Daoist_FG_007

    Academy arc is not only slow but also boring. There's 90% filler. Even the vhapters where story develops even a little a filled with fillers. Even fillers are extended upto multiple chapters.

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    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0073mth
    Posted

    It's good. The only problem is that many chapters are completely filler. Example Ch 293 and 294 both were just about Atticus going to the new classroom. Nothing happened in between except small talk with Kael. I wouldn't mind fillers as long as the chapters are longer.

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    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0073mth
    Commented

    Dropping this, guys, I have no idea how it got so popular. People probably lost their brain cells before reading this.

    Ch 14 Encounter [1]
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    Void Evolution System
    Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0073mth
    Commented

    Silver Hair!? Red Eyes!? One lost arm reminding him of his failure!? Oh no, I don't like where this is going. I'll go crazy if he gets a metallic arm.

    Ch 10 Mutate [2]
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    Void Evolution System
    Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0073mth
    Commented

    Next He will enter the lowest floor and find some sealed beauty who will fall in love with him. Oh God, I swear if it reaches that point, I'll start spamming dislikes.

    Ch 9 Mutate [1]
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    Void Evolution System
    Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0073mth
    Replied to Mystero

    Ikr!? Like it'd be different if he got a system, some resource or even a random powerup out of the blue. But he realised on his own. Bro, this is soo dumb. barely started and I already see 3 red flags. If I see 3 more, I'll quit.

    Ch 7 Survive [2]
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    Void Evolution System
    Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0073mth
    Commented

    I take it Null is the Moon. The Sun probably covers it so it can't be seen.

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 – Null
    altalt
    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0073mth
    Commented

    NOW THIS, Ladies and Gentle feels like the start of a Great Novel, A True Gem, A Classic. The main character meets and becomes friends with someone who lives a completely different life, they have different viewpoints, and they go on a journey. Moreover, the end of the journey is in sight yet so far at the same time. It gives me the feel of every other good anime that has been adapted from a game.

    Ch 8 Chapter 8 – Kill The Sun
    altalt
    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0074mth
    Posted

    Author Here. This is my first ever literary work. First of all, I'm not a native English speaker, so obviously there will be mistakes. If any part seems bland or lifeless, please suggest to me how to improve it. I am open to any an md all suggestions.

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    Cosmic Chronicles
    Fantasy · Daoist_FG_007
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0074mth
    Replied to Guiltythree

    Wow, you actually replied. I am truly honored

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Daoist_FG_007
    Daoist_FG_0074mth
    Posted

    Easily the best webnovel I've read. The pinnacle of this platform

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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