Marshmallowsan
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Currently putting the "I" in "INFP" (0.0)/\ I draw stuff \(-3-)/
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Marshmallowsan4mthPostedI really like the direction of the story and it's really heartfelt. I also like the words you use in expressing the emotions of the characters, it's very nice. Also, you could try to give the characters more of a background or like summary of who they are, especially to the main characters. Keep it up!
- Marshmallowsan4mthCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4: 'A new student in our midst': Arata's jealousy
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BIG BROTHER??!!!!!
YUMIKO (smirking): Consider it payback, big brother. - Marshmallowsan4mthCommented
I thought Katori was a girl's name 🤔
As I stepped through the front door, the familiar warmth of home embraced me. Katori, my ever-teasing big brother, greeted me with a playful smirk. - Marshmallowsan4mthCommented
smooth x2 😏
We shared a meal, and Arata dropped me home, using the pretext that a girl shouldn't walk home alone in the evening. - Marshmallowsan4mthCommented
He's super shy, super shy (o゜▽゜)o☆
Arata, with a shy yet cool demeanor, suggested grabbing a bite. Eager for any excuse to spend more time with him, I agreed. - Marshmallowsan4mthCommented
dang 😏
After the final bell rang, it was time for my tutoring session with Arata. However, a twist awaited as I found myself engaged in conversation with Jun and Kaoru. Arata, passing by on his way to the library, intervened by grabbing my hand. - Marshmallowsan4mthCommented
The second male lead?!😱
Arata, the master of composure, couldn't conceal a hint of jealousy as Kaoru sat beside him while Jun took the spot next to me. Introductions ensued, and I extended a friendly welcome, expressing my hope for us to become friends. Jun responded with a cool smile, his extroverted nature subtly making itself known. - Marshmallowsan4mthCommented
wait, is it katori or kaoru?😵
YUMIKO (rolling eyes) Kaoru, it was not a date. We were just studying English and Mrs.Olivia suggested Arata could help. - Marshmallowsan4mthCommented
oooooooooooh , that was real smooth 😏👌
YUMIKO (playfully) Well, I think "serendipity" is a lovely word. Don't you? - Marshmallowsan4mthReplied to Potato_hooman910Ch 8 CHAPTER 8: "トラブルが頭をもたげ始める"
- Marshmallowsan4mthReplied to Potato_hooman910Ch 9 告知 [Notice]
- Marshmallowsan4mthCommentedCh 1 prologue: How it started..
- Marshmallowsan4mthCommented
Girl...😂
Although she was extremely wrong about that ideology she had, at that same moment her parents instantly called of the celebration claiming there was a family emergency, right there and then the guest began to evacuate the party. Her father then gave her a look of evil which sent a chill down to spine then she thought to herself ''im going to die at such a young age,I'm only 10years old I haven't even tasted*soju* yet" - Marshmallowsan4mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1
- Marshmallowsan4mthReplied to glass_frog
えみ😂
Tsukiko could feel the weight of the text message she had just received, the plan that could possibly kill them and their loved ones would start tomorrow, not next week, not next month, tomorrow. She sucked in a deep breath before slowly letting it out to calm herself down before replying to Jae-sung's message. "Okay. I'm ready to do my part, Ipromise". Tsukiko hit the send button and stood up to lay on her bed, feeling even more drained than she was before and let out a fatigued sigh. As she was in the middle of sighing, her screen lit up and a 'ding' was heard. Jae-sung had already replied to her message??, so fast?!! - Marshmallowsan4mthReplied to glass_frog
i am still trying to take it slow 😫
Jaesung, "Yes...and no. I'll explain it on the way there. Anyway, before we get the information, we'll need to take it slow and observe what may happen in the next few days, but this part of the plan is dangerous. After all, judging from the nature of the anonymous message, I'd say whoever's pulling the strings still plans to toy with us by sending more monsters from The Darkness which would mean that we would be in constant danger, so we would have to be very careful, all the time. Tsukiko, I know I already asked you before but are sure you want to do this?". Tsukiko nodded vigorously to show that she was both ready and willing. - Marshmallowsan4mthReplied to glass_frog
of course, since this is fiction 😉
What Kim Jae-sung wanted to do was to play along with the anonymous person while they secretly investigated on their own. Though it sounded easy, Tsukiko knew it wasn't. They would be risking their lives for this very investigation, and they may not be able to find any information, plus they were both still teenagers, how could two teenagers conduct a whole investigation, all on their own? - Marshmallowsan4mthReplied to glass_frog
ikr😭
Tsukiko was as shocked as she was impressed and gave him a thumbs up. Jae-sung smiled lightly at this gesture and began to quickly explain the details of his plan. Tsukiko listened very carefully and once he was done; she couldn't help but widen her eyes and she turned her head to face him. Jae-sung faced her as well, putting a very serious expression on his face, he asked, "Can you do it?". Truth be told, she really wasn't sure if she could as Jae-sung's plan was extremely dangerous. - Marshmallowsan4mthReplied to Potato_hooman910Ch 7 CHAPTER 7: "心配しないで下さい"