yes. literal veins

Five star rating review, and go! I'm only three chapters in at this point , and this was supposed to come in at five, but I've felt like i had to at least say something before then and this review is based on what I've read so far. the writing is fantabulous and flowery to follow. it's easy to understand and projects vivid mental imagery following each sentence descriptions. so far I'll give it a solid 8.5 out of ten. as for the pacing, it might seem a bit too early of me to give a review concerning this aspect, but I've enjoyed the story development and pacing quiet a bit so far, so I'll offer this an 8 out of 10 too. concerning other aspects, I'll have to first of all continue with the story. and depending on how well you keep the story progressing ,my ratings and review may or may not change. i actually haven't read books like this before, but this was certainly in interesting experience. the first three chapters got me, and I have to encourage you to keep writing and keep up the good work, dear author. on webnovel, commitment pays. don't stop writing .

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just giving honor where honor is due in my opinion, all Isekai protagonist should strive to be like Cid. and thanks for reading

I'm only one chapter in, but the prologue got from the writing style. I'll advise you try it before overlooking it and decide yourself. now I'm really looking to how far this goes, and I'm not particularly a fan of the vampire genre. Keep it up🔥🔥

yooo! this prologue was amazing. you've got my attention .

he's socially awkward right from Earth. and more like he finds it even harder to deal with kids, and aggressive ones like him

What Ridge is trying to say is that, he understands the mentality ,but he as a person doesn't agree with it. that mentality is too dark and heavy for a kid Reo's age to have just after one horrible experience . but at the same time , Reo already had ample time to reach his conclusion of..if you want to be something , simply be the best... second place is first place for losers...his reasoning is partially under the influence of his trauma. and this is only a stepping stone for what I plan over his future development as a character to come.

was it tho?😂 seemed kinda obvious

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I understand. I'm not also fund of that harem troupe. But I like female characters who stand out, but not love interests, I hope you understand ?

😂😂 let's say I was kind of younger when I wrote that part

typo error . thanks for pointing it out, I'll work on it

thanks for reading , I'm glad you liked it

Thank you so much, I'll edit it now

for real? 😂

not really. when you think of apocalypse ,you'll also imagine Human fortress, or last lines of defense and civilization. it's a common characteristic of the genre realized even in Aot.

he's just an egoist, and a cocky b*stard. except he has actual skills to back it up

love the pacing, keep it up.