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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning2d
    Replied to Shayan_Tahir

    I honestly think he did abandon the Fanfic, although I still haven't lost hope since I keep coming back here hehe 😅

    Ch 105 Announcement
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning6d
    Replied to Shayan_Tahir

    exactly my friend, this is like a filler arc where the author further explores his fantasies 😂..........

    Ch 133 Los Aliados de esta realidad
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning10d
    Commented

    Well...it was the best Mushoku Tensei fanfic, one that really understood the characters and had a similar essence to the original work... it's a shame that it was abandoned, but you don't always get what you want

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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning11d
    Replied to Kornet85

    Pero que fumada ¿Eh? Aunque bueno, los fanfics se supone que son para explorar estás posibilidades. Pero sigue siendo una fumada XD

    Ch 129 Mushoku Tensei
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning29d
    Replied to URLISITO

    Bro, el fanfic está bueno,eso sin duda. Pero tampoco tienes que lamerle los pies XD

    Ch 122 La Guerra De Shirone,el fuerte Karon
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning1mth
    Commented

    Bro jaja decídete si usar las comillas o los guiones XD

    Ch 118 Una Nueva amenaza
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning1mth
    Replied to Kornet85

    No sé, ¿Un hombre que se supone está enamorado de 4 mujeres y una de ellas es una pelirroja sexy? Creo que cualquiera estaría más que satisfecho ¿No crees?

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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning1mth
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    Jaja después de 4 días seguidos leyendo este fanfic tengo que decir que es muy entretenido 👍, me gustó mucho la nueva personalidad de este Rudeus y que tenga la confianza que le faltaba al Japonés y por sobretodo,que justificaras con que era culpa de su cuerpo que pudiera sentirse atraído para lo que para él son niñas y adolescentes (eso en la novela siempre me desagradó, que aunque se podría decir lo mismo solo lo podemos especular y no confirmar por nunca decirse directamente). La relación que tiene con Nanahoshi me parece buena, siempre pensé que en la obra original pasaría algo entre ellos por TODO lo que hizo por ella el Rudeus original,y la confianza que le tenia cómo incluso contarle lo del diario cuando sus propias esposas ni lo saben. Ah eso me lleva a otra cosa que me gustó mucho, que ellas sepan que es un reencarnado, Rifujin siempre se saltó esto y me alegra ver (o mejor dicho leer) sus reacciones ante esto . Ahora vamos a las cosas malas, este fanfic al principio se me hacía muy pesado, casi parece un resumen de los eventos originales con pequeñas variaciones, menos mal después de la Saga del diario del futuro ya comenzó a diferenciarse de la obra original. Aunque hay detalles que no me gustan para nada: 1. ¿Por qué este Rudeus puede usar aura de batalla? No tiene sentido, tal vez sea un alma diferente, pero no significa que también cambie el cuerpo dónde anda, que tiene justo algo que debería impedirle usarla. 2.Lo que ha ocurrido en los últimos capítulos, joder ¿Cómo es posible que la Ariel original tuviera más escrúpulos? esa sí podía llamarse amiga de Sylphy, pero este Paulo tampoco se salva, que se llena la boca diciendo que amas a sus 4 esposas y va y besa sin mucho problema a Ariel 3. Eris no parece Eris, más bien, parece alguien casi diferente. Y por último , pero es más una sugerencia que una cririca:Creo que deberías empezar a diferenciar los diálogos de los pensamientos de los personajes con las comillas o con los guiones como se ve que lo intentas a veces, en ocasiones es difícil saber si Rudeus está pensado o hablando por la ausencia de las "comillas" o —guiones—.

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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning2mth
    Replied to Sacred_Author

    I don't think so, this Rudeus if I'm not mistaken is King level in detox magic and even if he wasn't, he would have enough level to remove himself to get rid of the effect.

    Ch 104 Desert Sun
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning2mth
    Replied to Raijin_Lightning

    Anyway, thanks for the chapter ☺️

    Ch 104 Desert Sun
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning2mth
    Commented

    I'm glad the story is finally moving forward, yes, the previous little saga was... interesting, but for now it seems more like filler than anything really important. And will Eris fans finally have our moment in the sun? When I started the Fanfic I firmly believed that the relationship with Eris would not happen, since Rudeus acts very distant during most of the time he spends with her (yes, I know it's because technically he already experienced that and had other priorities, but even then , something was missing) Now they're alone, and with Eris having another insecurity... oh my god, why is this so canon?...Furthermore, this chapter reinforces the fact that Rudeus is basically unstoppable, the only person I see who can stand up to him is his ally. Wouldn't this be problematic? since the story can get boring if Rudeus can handle everything and everyone 😵

    Ch 104 Desert Sun
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning2mth
    Replied to S_K_0017

    I don't think that will happen, since if I'm not mistaken, isn't this Rudeus supposed to have a King level in detox magic? Or was it just him in the healing one?

    Ch 104 Desert Sun
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning3mth
    Replied to S_K_0017

    Buddy, that would be TOO MUCH plot armor for Rudeus if he without his armor could defeat Gul Farion. Gul Farion is stronger than the God of the North, if he gave problems to this Rudeus who is very OP compared to Canon Rudeus, imagine Gul? Plus, that would be terrible for the plot because it would make things more boring by not having any threats that Hitogami could use to screw Rudeus over.

    Ch 99 The Friendly Demon King
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning5mth
    Replied to Coolex

    No problem, so don't abandon the story everything is fine [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 86 Cliff Grimoire
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning5mth
    Replied to RandyButterNups

    Hey... you're right, I didn't notice because for me Rudeus is always expressed like that from the rest of the boys. since technically it was always older, and here it is even more lol

    Ch 83 Legends of the University #2
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning5mth
    Replied to S_K_0017

    Dude, make your own Fanfic and there Rudeus will have all the skills and powers that you want to give him, this way you save the time of commenting on the same thing again as if they were going to happen.

    Ch 82 Luna's First Day
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  • Raijin_Lightning
    Raijin_Lightning5mth
    Replied to S_K_0017

    finally...finally you give an interesting possibility and you don't comment over and over again the same thing like a bot

    Ch 82 Luna's First Day
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