Kang_Min_Rin
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Pretty good story and setting just needs a little bit of editing . The story is intriguing and catchy . Recommended to dark character lovers. Do your best author . Keep going
why asking he must already know let him ask different question
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setting is good
please edit it again
well written this paragraph
why would he say this is robbery . oh come on robbers never do that
please remember to correct your mistake
what ?? you wrote this kind of scene with his sister ???
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nice start
I can read but can't imagine I wouldn't say that you are not a good writer I would say you are a great writer just needs experience Good luck Fighting
show his emotions like he pats his head or his eyes have a glimpse of emotions and you should write more about how and what they did while talking
Just keep going
good luck