The story has a different aura, most stories don't. When you get bullied they just take it, but here the lead role is standing up for herself, which is amazing! Also it has a great teenage high school atmosphere.

The book gon head south! it's getting pretty heated.

Glad to hear that, looking forward to reading itAnd it's an opportunity to pair up with you on this work.

Well! This is the end, had a great time reading it I must say, it's up to the writer if he wants to keep going or cut it short. Originally the story has alot of reasons to keep going on but unfortunately it was not. From the ending ; fans could demand for a springoff. The story lacked something called action, and every play needs action to keep it alive. There was action with the girls room, with Logan and with Landon that's if you get the action am talking about. There could be twist of plot, in your idea if I may pitch; Luna and Lucille suppose to have little squabbles cause they lost their Mom at an early age, it's quite real if that happens.The way Logan was introduced their should be a twist in his side, which is Lucille a timid, quite, nerdy girl could fall for Logan, while Logan could fall for her sister Luna who has the social life of a teenager and who is also cool. While on the other hand Luna will fall for Landon and Landon would reciprocate it. So those two are shipped. It was never clear that they are identical twins but I suppose they are from "the resembles" so the two sisters would make the hit here as Luna like Landon she will be okay with her sister taking on Logan. Logan will think he is in love with Luna that's just the name, but he fell for Lucille and her personality, that will come to light in the end. So their is abit of action, twist, and turns which will make the audience ponder more.But either way this is a great piece, keep it up!

Okay I noticed something from the first chapter but I kept reading I thought it will be addressed but maybe it was not noticed... There are misspellings in the names of the characters like Luna to luan, Miya to miay, Eva to Ava. Originally the names were in the first mention, but there is typing error alot. I know it's an honest mistake but endeavour to review it before releasing okay? Thank you.And also there is a misunderstanding in a place where Luna is replaced with Lucille and Lucille for Luna that was in chapter 4 and 5 if am not mistaken, fortunately am not, it may confuse the reader unless if the reader was not following. So please check those details. Thank you!

I am currently loving where this is heading to! Keep going!

I loved the first chapter! It was great! Incredible! Superb!