the rest of this is gonna be so much better than this chapter just wait like a month and see

ill explain it later so dw

Just make it a bit slower ok, I'll try.

ok chapter could do better

I know I should praise my work but, I'm a beginner. I am just flat-out bad at this. My character development is mediocre at best and my pacing is a bit too fast. Right now I am writing chapter two, I will improve with time. Some of the strengths of my story are probably the worldbuilding and story. Take it with a chapter two point of view if you read this later. Also, my weaknesses are probably character development, pacing, and having a lot of motivation. I rate it 3.4/5. I am just a 14-year-old writing a cool story for fun after all. Don't spend your coins on this for now, I don't want you to waste money on me.