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_03_Jaiprakashp

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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp2mth
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    obviously he will win, how can this be not be one-sided fight, only because author wants to extend the number of waste chapters and make readers mentally unstable and totally waste their fast pass and coins for his novel.

    Ch 435 Facing The Serocis [Pt 2]
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp2mth
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    why do need his back story man can't you finish the scenario you r simply dragging the story.

    Ch 117 Freezing boy
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    Only Wisdom Awakened
    Fantasy · Almun_
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp3mth
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    obviously he is Adrian chase you r simply making it more obvious about him having black hair and blue eyes.

    Ch 241 The New Order [Pt 2]
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp3mth
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    now for next chapters you r going to show Rey pov before going on next topic it's frustrating and simply waste of coins and fast pass.

    Ch 218 The Great Lord Phobio
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp3mth
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    he could have arrived when the sword shattered was he waiting for a formal invitation to intervene in a losing fight.

    Ch 209 Yuri’s Rampage
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp4mth
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    couldn't he finish it already and done with his job, he is always wasting time with his inner monologue.

    "Haaa… these guys…" Rey sighed, already feeling his patience wear thin.
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp4mth
    Commented

    can't he just quit the part time job and focus on system.

    Ch 6 Offering Help
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    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp4mth
    Commented

    how many more chapters is he going to avoid his surroundings and troubles like a coward and keep running away can't he just accept his life he is leading for once.

    Ch 74 I don't have a 'Reborn Bone Pill'
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    The supporting character's harem is very normal
    Fantasy · HikaruKiki
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp4mth
    Commented

    I think Adonis is lot a shady character it's impossible to be such aa good character.

    Ch 69 Captive
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp4mth
    Commented

    it's already third chapter where he addressed his strength growth at the end of the chapter but still not acting on it.

    Ch 57 The Deal Made [Pt 2]
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp4mth
    Commented

    can't you finish it in one chapter it's little bit too in depth story writing which makes it boring.

    Ch 56 The Deal Made [Pt 1]
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp5mth
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    can't you make him advance to next floors to increase his battle power , it fells the story is not making any further progress and is stuck. If you keep on going to add unnecessary details for every chapter it's going to get boring to read.

    Ch 43 Rey Vs The NightWolf
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp5mth
    Commented

    he can do all his experiments after he becomes little bit stronger u know it's frustrating that he wasting his time with hobs for almost 10 chapters.

    Ch 42 Return To The Hobgoblins
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp5mth
    Commented

    chapter and it's name didn't match at all there is no slaughter only his inner monologue which is a waste and boring.

    Ch 33 The Hob Slaughter [Pt 2]
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp5mth
    Commented

    I don't think it is hilarious at all what is he even doing with his intelligence why should he be afraid of her, can't he tell that he is strolling around and it is none of her business.

    Ch 26 Return To The Estate
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • _03_Jaiprakashp
    _03_Jaiprakashp5mth
    Commented

    shouldn't he discard his previous name and refered as such and use his new identity name in reference while writing

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: "Golden Lion Breathing Technique" and "Peak Quasi-Knight" (Seeking Chase Reading)
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    The Wizard Path From The Simulator
    Eastern · Baa Sheep Sheep Sheep
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