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Lone_Raut_

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A person who has recently given SSC 10th Exam......A Vivid Reader...A Die-hard Fan Of Anime....An Inspiring Author Join My Discord... https://discord.com/invite/YfyEdbYF

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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_3d
    Replied to unseenpickle

    this minor arc of Raven's past as it will be referenced in the upcoming story arcs.

    Ch 23 Chapter 23. Nexus...[5]
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_6d
    Posted

    The author, Starting of the Novel is quite interesting and intriguing. Honestly, I like this... Well, I want to give a 5-star rating but you know this is just starting therefore I can't give you one. But Novel Deserve it. I would appreciate it if you after posting the chapters, read them slowly and with focus so you can avoid any spelling mistakes or errors...It will be quite helpful and don't get offended because this is just advice.

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    My Stepmom and Three Stepsisters Are Yanderes???
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_6d
    Commented

    Hey there! Just wanted to point out that there's a small spelling mistake in your text. The word "wasting" is misspelled, and I thought you might want to correct it to avoid any criticism. It's just a friendly heads-up!

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    My Stepmom and Three Stepsisters Are Yanderes???
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_7d
    Replied to KAIZEL

    Well, Brother, it's Attack Of Raven, not Ryan's and Raven has the Talent Of Sword.

    Seeing These Formation Art, Riyan's Eyes Shoned with Interest,"Demonic Sword Formation Art, One Of the Most Powerful Art Of her Father, Maybe I Should learn it From her later, Good Power Up will be for Me..!!!".
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_14d
    Replied to Dozer_2600

    Brother , That Period Of Time has Some intriguing Details in the Story in Volume 2, so please read it till at least to Volume 2, to know... Thank You For Asking Question...

    Ch 6 Chapter 6.Rise Of the Riyan As Singer
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_20d
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    I am Surpassing the Limits Of Shameless...

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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_21d
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    I am Surpassing the Limits Of Shameless...

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    Villain : The White Washer...
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_22d
    Commented

    Well, Main Character using Shield as Weapon in the Novel, Should only be in early chapters of first floor. Because Way the Main Character described in Orginal Novel that Weapon users became useless after in the future except That Character Lionel, Right ? And Idea Of Shield is interesting.... Best Of Luck on Your Journey As Author....

    Ch 3 Tutorial [3]
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    The Yandere Villainess Is Obsessed With Me!
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_23d
    Commented

    I am new to creating profiles of characters and I am not sure how to start. Can you suggest any advice or tips on how to go about it? Thank you.

    Ch 15 Chapter 15. Fera Starlight's Past
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_23d
    Replied to unseenpickle

    Well, She has trauma because Of this, in Orginal Novel Saint's Odyssey, Alex had to kill her brother so she can overcome the trauma

    Ch 15 Chapter 15. Fera Starlight's Past
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_24d
    Replied to unseenpickle

    Well, there Should be logical Reason For her rejecting Orignal Riyan.I just Can't make her rejecting Riyan's Confessions for No reason and her hating his Dog-licking behaviour

    Ch 15 Chapter 15. Fera Starlight's Past
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_27d
    Replied to unseenpickle

    Raven's Corrupted Thunder Art is much higher ranking art than our mc

    Ch 14 Chapter 14. Academy's Entrance Exam...[5]
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_30d
    Replied to AllaroundBaka

    Dear Esteemed Reader, I am delighted to receive your feedback on My Novel. Your response is highly appreciated and I am grateful that you took the time to share your thoughts with me. Your input will help me improve my writing skills and create better content in the future. Thank you once again for your valuable feedback and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Author

    Ch 13 Chapter 13. Academy's Entrance Exam...[4]
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_30d
    Replied to java_Wow

    There Some inter-related Story reason

    Ch 13 Chapter 13. Academy's Entrance Exam...[4]
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_1mth
    Replied to Lone_Raut_

    I am Not Sure, But it Will be less than 15, but I Guess it Depends on Story

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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_1mth
    Replied to tjv_m

    You are Welcme

    Ch 12 Chapter 12. Academy's Entrance Exam...[3]
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_1mth
    Replied to Dark_B

    Alex is the Name because I was reading, "I don't know the protagonist" I mismatched it name of that novel's main character

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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_1mth
    Replied to Dark_B

    "Dear friend, I cannot express my gratitude enough for your recent words of encouragement. As an aspiring author, I often find myself questioning my abilities and wondering if my writing will ever be good enough. Your kind words have not only lifted my spirits but have also given me a renewed sense of motivation to continue pursuing my dream. Your recognition means everything to me, and it serves as a reminder that my hard work and dedication are not going unnoticed. Your encouragement has been instrumental in helping me overcome self-doubt and has given me the strength to keep pushing forward. Thank you from the bottom of my heart."

    Ch 12 Chapter 12. Academy's Entrance Exam...[3]
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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_1mth
    Replied to _Nihility

    Dear brother, I appreciate your review of my novel and I am grateful for your feedback. As a new writer, I understand that there may be some errors in my work, and I am open to constructive criticism. Therefore, please don't hesitate to point out any mistakes you may have noticed, and I will do my best to correct them. Thank you once again for taking the time to read my novel and share your thoughts with me. I look forward to improving my writing skills and creating better stories in the future.

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  • Lone_Raut_
    Lone_Raut_1mth
    Replied to Terra_Chad

    The author of the text seems to be excited about a forthcoming story that they are either writing or following closely. They mention that they have a strange idea that they believe will be an excellent addition to the story in the later arcs. It is unclear what the story is about, but the author's enthusiasm suggests that it is an engaging and thrilling narrative. It would be intriguing to learn more about the idea and how it can enhance the story's overall plot.

    3. Main Reason Riyan is a Villain and He can use this incident to release the "Legends Never Die" Song. As it will serve as a tribute to Hunter Sacfrice and Accelerate the Progress of the task.
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