This the first story where Ive blocked reading further latter known stopped at chapter 40 on web novel and I'm currently 58 stories, novels and fanfics in. Though I do get the point. buying just one chapter instead of buckle purchasing is even weirder to me.

Those two smooth brains are wayyy too dumb to be ravenclaws. No really desire to learn, figure things out or put in work . I hope that changes soon enough.

I hate how weak willed against women you made this MC. He can't say no to them, begs for their forgiveness and just accepts them being manipulated into joining the order by dumbledore and just rolls over for it I was actually enjoying this story til he started becoming a useless against little girls 8+ years younger than his actual self. Please do something to balance this women whipped bs out, it's really taking away from the story more than you think in my opinion.