It's well written. I like the fact , FL can be at a disadvantage sometimes but not weak or cringe. The author makes us cherish Edith and teach us to continue to live on despite all the hardship we endure. Thank you, I enjoy reading your work

omg, i'm blushing for them☺️☺️☺️😍😍

Storyline is ok. maybe the grammar should be improved.but overall it's really good ,i still can understand .i hope this comment didn't discourage the author. Because still,the author are much better than me.thank you, i have a great time reading your writing.

well i like the way the author represents every character here.life is sometimes unfair .but sooner or later the implication will hit back either to the duke,cliff and lizzy and everyone involved. you did good,you get good. "be grateful for what you have ." maybe this is what the author try to delivered to the reader