Ah, it will be polyamory, another novel that does the same thing, I don't like polyamory, I prefer a relationship between two, I love the harem but without that, the story had good foundations, I was really liking it but I'm leaving it here because polyamory isn't I like it, but otherwise very good, I'm loving your other novel as well, you have very good writing :")

The relationships of the characters will be complex, that is, they may be with other people in a sexual way, well apart from the protagonist, if you want the protagonist to stay with someone, you have to be prepared since they will be with other people in a way that they cannot. Like, it already happened to me and I left the novel because it took away all my desire to continue reading, it was in chapter 68, I wanted Xhez to be alone with Rin, damn, yes, I already know what Rin was going to do and Xhez could do The same if she wanted to but this is the beauty of this type of protagonist, that she can do it but the others can't, :'v

If you don't like polyamory in a story or harem, don't read this story, it totally ruined my experience of reading this novel, at least make it clear in the synopsis, it wasn't supposed to be the story of a Villain and her maid

If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, they explain to you from the beginning of the work that the protagonist's mother created and gave birth to the protagonist because she wants her love and He looks for love without betrayal from her, that's why he didn't look for anyone else and only loves the protagonist, then why do you make the mother also have relations with her girlfriends, if from the beginning it was clear that he would only be with her, if not It's like she would have already had her own harem, and the girlfriends accept it anyway, if they make it clear that they are in love with the protagonist and the mother by going out a couple of times also makes her fall in love, what rubbish, at least it makes it clear that there will be all that In the synopsis, it screwed up my reading experience, I'm sorry for the words but this was very disappointing for me, I was loving the story so much :'v

If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, I really liked everything else, unless they specify it from the beginning or in the synopsis, what a big disappointment I was, many stories They do that, also, if you don't like the Harem or a relationship of more than 2, don't read it since it is also present in the story. Personally, I like the harem, but without the polyamory.

I tried to read it since I found the synopsis interesting, but I couldn't go through more than 10 chapters since the reading and grammar are very simple, it was very disappointing for me, because I thought I was going to love it because these types of stories are my favorites but it wasn't like that, the story itself was not what I expected, I did what I could to continue reading but I couldn't stand it :'v

So far I have liked it, but the grammar of the novel is very simple at times and it takes me out of the story, I hope you can correct a little how the story is told :")

Everything was going well until the protagonist's mother joined them in bed, I thought that there were not going to be relationships between them other than with the protagonist, this is the problem with most stories with dual crops and things like that, It was better that the protagonist only stays with her mother, and Yasenia is not supposed to be her mother's love, that's why she created her and now with the first one she finds she wants to do it with her, chapters ago she said that she was tired of live and only when the protagonist was born did I recover everything, it makes no sense for Angel to want to do it with Yasenia's mother if they are very in love with her and her mother only joined them now, I mean Yasenia is all so that she loves her and her mother only By being there he made it that easy, this type of things are not to my liking, I was loving the story and this did hurt me, I won't even read chapter r18 with my mom :'v

Seriously? Why do you have to give her a child now, she had to find a partner or whatever, not give them to her, I'll keep reading just because I like the story so far, but it's really annoying when they put this kind of stuff in. characters when the main character doesn't even have a human form, I thought they were going to kill him in the previous fight towards the FC he would have more determination to become stronger, what a mistake

Author, please if you are going to add romance later or something similar, don't make Kira feel that too since she said she feels the same as Freya, and it would be very uncomfortable to read if she feels the same at those moments since it would be like polyamory and I don't like that, leaving that aside, the rest was incredible

Start reading the novel today and I honestly didn't like that you gave the system its own free will, I mean it's good that it thinks for itself but I don't like that it has control, I thought that the protagonist was going to follow her path as an empress trying hard but with this it seems I always need help from someone else, I'll definitely keep reading because I'm loving it so far, but don't put a situation where Kira acts on her own and complains of discomfort, those things are very annoying in a story

Yes, there is discreet yuri at the beginning between the 2 maid sisters, which caught me off guard but I accepted it since they didn't show much of it and they also said that love between women was taboo and there is almost no one who does it, so it is an exception about them, the more it progresses they confirm that they do it alone when the MC is not there since they love each other a lot from before and the MC accepts it since it excites him, there is no problem with that because it is only yuri between the two of them but then in chapter 232 it happens with two women, this time more adults and they barely met, the protagonist can do it because of his powers of charm, but it doesn't make sense for it to happen with them since they made it clear that it was taboo from the beginning and out of nowhere they do it, the author wanted to continue adding yuri from what I see, and the majority only love the MC and others only love each other as friends or sisters, well it doesn't matter in this chapter I leave the novel since I can't stand where it is the story is directed, don't get me wrong, I love Yuri, I like his stories but in Harem I like that they only want and do with the MC, that is a harem, I was loving the novel for everything it had but with the yuri again it takes away all my motivation :'v