interesting idea, however its a bit rough, maybe if its fixed, and polished, then It might head to a good start to sure, the good think about this is that its fresh and a lot more new then what I usually read.

when will he meet naruto?

that happened to me when I was 9 they put drugs when I was in the hospital, and I laughed saying i wont fall asleep and fell asleep in 3 seconds.