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DaoistIJKSkP

DaoistIJKSkP

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Proud Yuri/Clone/Whore hater

2023-10-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
    DaoistIJKSkP23d
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    See that makes more sense, kinda like mana reflux. I was thinking it was a simple disruption like cutting the flow off temporarily, but a reflux cause by the reaction would definitely cause some major damage

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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Archer you’re making me cringe here

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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Scales should have a natural resistance to mana blasts, he’s a being made of mana. Even if his mana was disrupted his scales should posses mana resistance, definitely should have been injured, but enough to take him out of the fight this long doesn’t seem logical. Maybe I’m misunderstanding how Dragons are in this verse but from my understand in almost every novel they have two major characteristics. Bodies as strong as adamantium and being overlords of mana (includes resistance to mana itself). I *could* see it being possible to injure him this much if the mana blasts were powered for example by a demi gods mana but regular blasts that cause disruption? It’s hard to believe

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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Hmmm, I mean sure restricting mana would affect him, but I don’t think it should be to this degree. A Dragon’s tough body doesn’t rely solely on mana. A body can be reinforced with mana, but dragons posses ridiculously strong bodies to begin with.

    But that's all he could do, as using his mana hurt him due to his wounds. He concluded that the cannons had something in them that affected mana. After saying that, even more soldiers from the First Legion appeared and got ready to charge as Elara led the charge.
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Those have to be stupidly strong weapons on those ships designed specifically to take him on, otherwise I don’t see how normal artillery can even scratch his scales

    He staggered with a sharp cry of pain, but anger fueled his next move. Despite the agony, he lunged towards the smaller ship and collided with it in a thunderous impact, taking out their weapons.
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Towered wouldn’t be referring to heigh no? Then wouldn’t the 25 be length not height

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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Oh? They’ve got some history together, though she ain’t listed in the new pending harem members in the discord. I’m guessing it’s not time for her to shine just yet

    Ch 692 Elara Ravensong
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Small suggestion but you could try using smirk instead of grin sometimes, a grin reveals teeth and honestly is a bit ugly. It fits when fighting against enemies but for moments like this a smirk seems more fitting. Should've said this sooner but havent read the chaps in a bit

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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Oyakodon

    Tamsin eyed her daughter's cheeks flush with color before shaking her head. "Your Majesty, please refrain from flirting with my girls. They aren't accustomed to the company of someone as handsome as you."
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    I’ve liked these chapters, BUT it does make me wonder if this information will just be repeated with slight modifications when it happens in present time.

    Ch 682 Arriving At The Draconia Kingdom (3)
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    True, but it’s very unrealistic. There will always be criticism that sounds like badmouthing

    ''That breeds descent, and that's not good for any realm, Valerian. We want a population who loves the royal family,'' Archer answered.
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Nah she can wait give Meera first

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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    Meera seggs asap

    He noticed how her flawless, porcelain-white skin exuded an air of purity and smoothness. Aisha spoke, bringing him back to reality, ''This is Meera Sharma. She would be Draconia's Prime Minister, Your Majesty.''
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    The walls are good for defense but if they’re all around the kingdom the view of the ocean is just gonna be giant walls unfortunately

    Archer ignored them and took off to examine the wall. He soared through the air on his powerful wings and saw a sight that skipped his heart. Before him rose an imposing black stone wall, towering fifty meters high and stretching as far as the eye could see.
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    I thought she was fair skinned? I think there was illustrations of her before but tbh I don’t remember it’s been a while

    Her smooth brown skin, reminiscent of chocolate, complemented her hair. Yellow eyes met his gaze, holding a mixture of attraction and something indescribable. Shaking his head slightly, he redirected his focus to her attire.
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    Her face was strikingly beautiful, and her lips exuded a lusciousness that seemed to beckon for kisses. Despite her slender physique, Thalia possessed curves in all the right places, which caught his eye, but he shook his head and scanned her.
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    What is meant to be centuries or sentries?

    He pointed to each section of the Legion on the map as he spoke. "Each Infantry Regiment consists of ten thousand men, organized into Cohorts of one thousand men each, further divided into five centuries of two hundred soldiers each."
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  • DaoistIJKSkP
    DaoistIJKSkP1mth
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    Definitely better now

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  • DaoistIJKSkP
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    And you lost me, had to skip the chapter after this.

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  • DaoistIJKSkP
    DaoistIJKSkP1mth
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    Has to skip to the next chapter after that

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