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We’ve been told how they look countless times, shouldn’t be repeated over and over again unless it’s like a big event. For example a Ball, social events, special moments etc. having the girls be described even in regular moments like this gets very repetitive and I find myself having to skim chapters to skip the descriptions
This paragraph has been deleted. - DaoistIJKSkP5dCommented"I wish safety for all of you on this journey," she began solemnly. "Archer has saved every one of us, often at great personal risk. Now, he lies in a bed fighting for his life. But we have the opportunity to save him. It won't be easy; some of us may get injured. But together, we possess the strength to accomplish this."
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Unnecessary descriptions
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And a Necro isn’t? Please 💀
So even though Liam's current plan was to register himself as a mage, he was confident that he would be able to become a magic swordsman on his own. - DaoistIJKSkP21dCommented
Ngl if I were Nala I’d be pretty disgusted since isn’t his Shadow Form ugly as hell? 💀
Nala held her stomach while laughing. Once the trio calmed down, Archer said farewell to Lucrezia and transformed into his Shadow Prince form, wrapping the lioness in darkness before vanishing. - DaoistIJKSkP23dCommented
Inara meeting maybe? We haven’t seen her in a while same with her granddaughter
Archer chuckled as he watched the Stone Men decimate the enemy forces. He soared over the landscape until he reached Naravo, the Lionheart capital. The sprawling city was even larger than his capital. - DaoistIJKSkP26dCommented
They were pastel pink, not light brown
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Pretty sure her mother didn’t no? Wasn’t her mother the only who tried to prevent her banishment?
Sera beamed when she heard this, then lunged at him like a predator and wrapped her limbs around him. She nuzzled into his neck. ''Everyone in my life abandoned me, but you never,'' she spoke quietly. ''You are the only person who has never left my side and has always been there for me.'' - DaoistIJKSkP26dCommented
This is repeated but includes Nov banks added too compared to 1 or two paragraphs up
Amid this, Archer's thoughts were interrupted by a meow, informing him that The Church Of Light and Novgorodian Banks were brimming with treasure. This elicited a chuckle from his inner goblin as his eyes glowed. - DaoistIJKSkP26dCommented
1 down 10+ to go
By the time his cock made it a quarter of the way inside, Archer felt her backdoor clamp down, sending a surge of incredible pleasure through his body. He grunted, his mind reeling from the intense, overwhelming sensation. - DaoistIJKSkP27dCommented
See nicknames like this are cute, Little Light. Not like what Archer calls his girls, he just be adding Dear in front of their race 💀
After they were done, the beautiful older woman turned to him and said, ''My Little Light. It has been wonderful teaching you for now.'' - DaoistIJKSkP27dCommented
THATS WHAT IM SAYING! xD Yet he gets smacked around all the time even though he’s a White Dragon ! He shouldn’t be struggling so much in fights majority of the time
'This is going to be hard,' Archer thought, realizing the three were weaker than him. However, they were dragons, which meant their Rank wasn't a full representation of their overall strength. - DaoistIJKSkP27dCommented
even “my” own?
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Someone at his level shouldn’t have the power to break his jaw like that, I still don’t get how a Human even if Mutated has the same specs as a Dragon
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Suddenly went first person. “me” should be “him”
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What sheets aren’t they still in the desert
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Daughter? Hope it’s a case like the witches. Would suck for the one person who’s linked to him not just by body, but literally by soul till the end of time to have already been tapped by someone else
Agrippina nodded with an honest smile, ''My daughter Flavia is a skilled warrior and has trained many women of the faith in the ways of war.'' - DaoistIJKSkP28dCommented
Bit of a weird name ngl
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Where are the vampire maids, they’re never mentioned anymore
Archer nodded and thought, 'I must hire some maids when the palace is completed. Maybe the dragonkin women will volunteer?'