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Ah that's genius! Haha. Maybe I'll edit the names tomorrow along those lines.
Shameless author reviewing his own story here. I like a little bit more slow paced, character focused stories so that's what you can expect while reading this! I will avoid doing any info dumps or anything of the sort, but despite my best efforts sometimes they will be necessary so bare with me during those times! I am a total amateur writer so I welcome any criticism or advice! (As long as its constructive of course. Haha) Thanks for giving my novel a shot and I hope you enjoy it!
He was the first to reach level 10 but he spent so much time looking into the different class options that someone chose before him.sorry, that might have been confusing.
The non 18 version is basically just the lemon parts removed with a few added details like, "They enjoyed each others company." Haha. I mean lets be completely honest with each other here, 99% of the time the lemons don't actually add any substantial benefit to the story and its just some extra fun in addition to the fantasy aspects. I'll probably leave them in, and people can just skip over them if they want. (Aside from chapter 15 where the lemon is short and only takes up a portion of the chapter, all other 18+ chapters will be standalones.)
I appreciate the review and I will do my best not to disappoint you with the future updates! I tend to be a bit over descriptive with my explanations so sometimes scenes can drag on longer than I intend but I hope that the added details make it easier to immerse yourself in the story! Again, and as always, I appreciate your support!
Thank you for the review! I tried to make Leo's personality ambiguous at the start by design. I wanted to portray a man who thought he knew his convictions but subconsciously still acted naïve from time to time since it is his first time holding the power to influence not only his own but other people's lives. Sorry if I was unable to portray that as well as I had hoped but I hope you will stick around and watch him settle into his newfound power!
My goal (no promises) is to upload two chapters a day around 9-10am EST (I live on the east coast of the US). I currently have a stockpile of chapters that I'm trying to expand every day just in case something prevents me from writing (I have a few health issues unfortunately) so for the foreseeable future I should be able to maintain the two-a-days.
Thank you for pointing this out! I can't edit my own chapters because I end up spending half the day writing and re-writing the same few paragraphs over n over so if you find any other errors please don't hesitate to point them out!