Definitely a bit better at not saying his name as much😂 thanks for the chapter

Hey that’s what we’re here for!

Liking the story so far. But was weird this chapter…. You kinda made a weird perspective like it was no longer a POV of Tom. You were saying his name way too many times like it was you just describing what he was doing.

Hey you know if you really need a break from it take a break. I’m happy reading your other fic. Or if you are planning to start a new fic I’d be fine with that too.

Probably one of the most well written fanfics I’ve read. Honestly don’t know where to find good ones. So thanks for the chapters

I’m loving not only this series but your legacies series too. Can’t wait to see what else you might make a fanfic of next.

Really hope you continue this story. Excited to see where you take this.

+1

Loved the chapter. Can’t wait for more

Actually really loving this so far. Really hope you keep story up. Curious about timeline when she’s gonna start training. Then potential superpowers since the world isn’t just arrowverse.