Ok let me just say that I yuna gets back to the reL world, she going to be disappointed that the cool cards that Pegasus gave her were not yuna anime exclusives. Second I like thatYuna is now facing the consequences of her interfering and that it powers up Dartz. I hope we get how yugi and kabia deal with it. Now thirdly my complaints. I don't think the oricalsos should have been that easy to get rid of. It was able to control gods, thus it should be able to unaffected like the gods. It took legendary and powerful cards knights to deal with it. Also geh, I feel like you could made it so geh never even came out, and yuna just lost normally. I have some critiques about your writing styles and stuff that I would love to discuss but I would do it at the end of the arc. I have a suggestion though. If you want to write duels more accurate and better and not sure how certain cards would react with each other, you can use ygo pro or somthing and use it to script duels. Anyway keep up the great work.

I'm happy yuna is realizing yugi needed to go through what he did and chacters need to grow naturally, BUT SHE COULD HAVE THOUGHT HAVE TJAT BEFORE ENTERING DUELIST KINGDOM AND BATTLE CITY! Beacuse of that Yugi doesn't have the title of king of games and doesn't have Ra, Joey didn't get face odion or kabia, Mai... actually I don't understand why Mai even joined Doma. She wasn't even tortured in the shadow realm by marik. How did dartz convince her. Maybe Yuna will face Mai and find out.

OH THANK GOD SHE HAD COMMEN SENSE! Now she just needs to NOT INTERVENE and things will go normally (minus dartz having one less ra and yugi not being the full king of games) that can't be too hard right. RIGHT!?!?

Sorry but I got be a rules lawyer for this good duel. The only mistake was jinzo being able to tribute summing himself. Due to the effects of zombie world only zombie monsters can be tribute summoned. I cant wait to see how Kyle expands his deck. This series has made me make my own skull serveant deck.

Rules lawyer time. Alexis couldn't have used cyber gymnast during Kyle's turn. Besides that the duel was good.

I see you pulled a i play yugioh the card game and gave it to both. I hope one of them (yugi not atem or yuna) gets the complete title. Also new lady. Who is she and she's proably yuna grand kid

Ok rules lawyer time. Berfoment is level 5 meaning Yugi couldn't have straight out summoned it. He needed a tribute. For life points are rounded up if they are uneven and divided. Meaning yugi would have had 451 lifepoints. A great duel with only one big mistake. Also tuna you cant call the power of the pharaoh bull. You won against him before and he could have done something way worse. Like exodia you with card sanctity if he wanted to.

My only complaint is that mai getting eliminated with out us reading it. I would have like instead for yuna for to eliminate her in the qualifiers. Like was it a battle royal that got her out or what was something else. Odion getting in makes sense beacuse the rare hunter cheated a lot even to enter the tournament. Keep up the work.