I feel pity for Angel. anyway this seems to be an interesting novel. I'll the rest of it later.

Her grey eyes *

Most of all, your book needs a nice book cover to attract more people.

I skimmed it and it seems to be an interesting novel

Not a bad plot to be honest. Good job

It has a wonderful story and the author is very skilled in writing. I see great potential in this novel and I hope the author continues with the same procedure

Apart from the literary words, I like the idea and dialogues in this novel.

I like the way you write this story. The atmosphere of the story is very well described.