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Vonnn

Vonnn

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2023-09-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn5mth
    Posted

    It was very skibidi, very fanum tax, so far the novel is good, a little fast paced, could use some improvements, but meh, it's good. Now what I want to see is, some actual uploading, author! What is thee doing with novel of thy? This an utmost sin, 2 whole years, update!

    Necropolis of the Gods
    Fantasy · Shrihari_Nagesh
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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn5mth
    Replied to OG_Buddha_

    "Animosity"Intense Ill will, here, the Guild.

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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn5mth
    Replied to OG_Buddha_

    Oh yea, sorry, that's a mistake and a draft of my old thought, I'll have to remove that part. Thank you.

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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn6mth
    Posted

    A well-crafted novel with clear descriptions that vividly paint the world of the book. The intrigue lies in its uniqueness, particularly the twist involving the eruption that granted powers to mankind. I would give it a solid 4 stars overall.

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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn7mth
    Commented

    Welp, figured out what's wrong. Thanks for the criticism from my fellow authors. Fight scenes...

    Ch 7 The Third Trial
    Talent Reborn:A Cultivator's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Vonnn
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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn7mth
    Replied to Todo_Aio

    Haha thx for the support, I'll be writing even more now. Reviews and comments are really a writer's pleasure!

    Ch 1 Awakening.
    Talent Reborn:A Cultivator's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Vonnn
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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn7mth
    Posted

    It's pretty good, a few grammar/spelling mistakes here and there. But not one being in this world of 7 billion is perfect, even now, I may be making mistakes. Now for the story, I appreciate the slow start. It's what im very used to, and the character complexity is decent. The relationship between the girl and mc is a nice relief from the rest of the novels I've read. The only problem I have is the genre, I'm not into western fantasy nor dark fantasy. But, this is still a fun read even without being my preference.

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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn7mth
    Replied to GifflarGod

    Well, at least for this story. It will be, I'm trying to avoid all the problems of writing novels. Of course, there are mistakes here and there but not one being in this world is perfect.

    Awakening.
    Talent Reborn:A Cultivator's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Vonnn
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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn7mth
    Replied to GifflarGod

    It's fundamental for a long novel, so yes. Not sure about harem.

    Awakening.
    Talent Reborn:A Cultivator's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Vonnn
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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn7mth
    Commented

    Author here, I'm sure nobody will see this but anyways. For the later cultivation realms like Spirit Severing, I will try to be as creative as possible. After all, it's not satisfying with a mere "boom spirit severing now come soul integration" ;)

    Ch 1 Awakening.
    Talent Reborn:A Cultivator's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Vonnn
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  • Vonnn
    Vonnn8mth
    Commented

    Author here, the cultivation ranks will be listed here cause of a bug where I can't create an auxiliary volume. 1.Qi condensation Realm2.Foundation Establishment Realm3.Core Formation Realm4.Golden Core Formation5.Nascent Soul6.Soul Formation Realm7.Saint/Saintess Realm8.Mahayana Realm9.Tribulation Transcendence(more to come with future updates)

    Ch 1 The Beginning
    The Primordial System (dropped, I made a new novel.)
    Fantasy · Vonnn
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