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Ashley_Bianchetti

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  • Ashley_Bianchetti
    Ashley_Bianchetti3mth
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    Please come back and work on the spelling and grammar

    Ch 250 Heroes arrive at the last second
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Ashley_Bianchetti
    Ashley_Bianchetti6mth
    Commented

    I love reading this story but we still need some edits like the “agan” here

    Agan, Vorden was amazed at how well Leo was able to navigate the entire place. He couldn't help but think that it had to have something to do with his ability. His curiosity was getting the better of him as a strange urge to touch Leo arose in him, but the opportunity didn't arrive.
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Ashley_Bianchetti
    Ashley_Bianchetti7mth
    Commented

    Love the story but now that it’s complete can we go back and fix all the little grammar errors ☺️

    Ch 118 Fire Vs Fire
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Ashley_Bianchetti
    Ashley_Bianchetti7mth
    Commented

    Messy and a bit hard to read at times

    Ch 2 Genetics
    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • Ashley_Bianchetti
    Ashley_Bianchetti8mth
    Commented

    So did y’all take it to mean that the three buildings are in the shape of people ? Or am I misunderstanding

    Ch 3 Military School
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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