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Meowyumm5mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.- Meowyumm5mthCommented
I've always been confused about the idea of seeking revenge against the person who sent you to another world. After all, the MC might not even know if their world has magic or not (which in this case we know nothing about). It could simply be a parallel Earth with advanced technology( which we readers know it's not), which would reduce the chance of fighting a being capable of bringing you there. There could be no mana for all the MC knows....I don't know... like if we were put in the perspective of the person who brought him there... wouldn't he seem like that arrogant young master who has eyes but can't see Mount Tai or something? Won't it have been better to explore the world building then make this statement? Idk can someone explain to me how this works?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Meowyumm7mthCommentedSpeaking of progress, Rain finally knew the names of his parents, grandparents, and the other granny. They were Roan, Leiah, Roswall, Melody, and Moira. Aside from Moira, they were from the Lonard family.
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as someone who just watched One Piece... I approve
This book has been deleted. - Meowyumm7mthReplied to Dark_immortal
Bro that boss in Grand Cross was a pain...but good pic
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he fr can't take a hint
"Amelia said that you may have had an ulterior motive for helping us, but I don't believe it! Whatever your past may have been, I believe that you have changed for the better! To reward your effort in changing yourself, I'll become your best friend!" - Meowyumm7mthReplied to Potatowned
but it isn't easy to join that school tho so that level of talent is normal for me
'It's very interesting.' Solus said. 'The worst mana core I detected is bright green, all the rest are different shades of cyan or deep blue. It's not a surprise that so many of Lark's proteges failed the admissions.' - Meowyumm8mthPosted
I'm loving the story, no doubt about it! But I will talk about the dialogue. Dialogue is like the heart of any story, pumping life into the characters. Your story does have some terrific moments (chapter 5 my favorite chapter so far :)), but here's the thing sometimes the talk feels a tad bit forced to me. It's a common hiccup in storytelling, nothing to sweat over, I did it a couple of times as well but it's worth talking about. But hey! I love it tho keep up the good work!
- Meowyumm8mthReplied to Swikong
I suppose you'll appreciate what I have in store for the story. :)
The Land of Iron serves as a sanctuary for samurais within the Naruto series. It is an isolated, neutral territory where various shinobi nations convene for diplomatic negotiations. The samurais of the Land of Iron are revered for their martial skills and feared for their strength. - Meowyumm8mthReplied to lazy_Asura
I also dislike them, so there is no need to worry. :)
'Could it be that this mark is somehow related to my rebirth in this world?' I mused, 'Maybe it's a gift from that pretty boy, a hidden potential that I'm meant to uncover. but he would have said so....urg! how I wished I had a system' - Meowyumm8mthReplied to Ayries_Jesea
Noted! I will take greater care in composing these scenarios in the future.
It had been a few days since the chakra explosion that had startled everyone in the castle, especially me. In the wake of that chaotic event, I had decided to exercise caution and put my attempts to control chakra on hold. The fear of what could go wrong if I pushed too far, had weighed heavily on my tiny shoulders. - Meowyumm8mthReplied to edu_rodeiro
It's true, but I'm concerned about the snake man - if you catch my drift - and I don't think Hidan was the only Jashin believer who could do what he can. :)
Mifune's eyes bore into each elder's, a silent plea for cooperation and shared wisdom. "I implore you," he concluded, "to share any information, any leads, no matter how obscure they may seem. For in the pursuit of understanding, we may find the means to protect the legacy of the Land of Iron." And as he made this earnest request, his voice softened, carrying a tone of discretion. "However," he added, "I urge you all to conduct this investigation in the utmost secrecy. We cannot afford to let knowledge of Seiji's condition reach ears beyond this council. The safety of the Land of Iron and the well-being of our young ward depends on it." - Meowyumm8mthReplied to Tyler_Henline_7485
Sorry, I didn't realize that calling someone "pretty boy" could give off that vibe. but yeah the love interest is a girl.
'Could it be that this mark is somehow related to my rebirth in this world?' I mused, 'Maybe it's a gift from that pretty boy, a hidden potential that I'm meant to uncover. but he would have said so....urg! how I wished I had a system' - Meowyumm8mthReplied to DongLong
hmm, can you at least tell me what I did wrong? so I can fix that pls?
"Why should I ?" I demanded, my voice wavering between frustration and desperation. "Why should I go into this unfamiliar world just cuz you're bored? Can't I simply return to my own world?... although I appreciate the opportunity. What about my grandmother, the sole family I have left?" - Meowyumm8mthReplied to DIMIE_21Ch 3 Heart curse
- Meowyumm8mthReplied to Cadenadeaventuras
Who Knows! :)
The messenger shrugged. "It's rare, but it's been documented before. The doctor said It's called the 'Nullification Body,' and it's said to be able to nullify any sort of curse that comes into contact with it." Mifune looked at his son with a mixture of relief and concern. "Well,that's good news," he said, his voice softening. "But we still need to be cautious. We don't know what could happen..." Mifune said. - Meowyumm8mthPosted
HELLO! HOW ARE YOU? DO YOU HAVE TIME TO TALK ABOUT OUR LORD AND-*cough cough* hey!! authors review here just here to tell you a few things! first! it's my first time writing fanfiction and second I am gaining experience in writing so that I can work on an original novel. second! you can skim through the first 2 chapters it's a bit cliche but if you want you can read it to know the main character's life before the event. and that's where the cliche stops. after the first 2 chapters. third! this world is the Naruto world but completely different at the same time you will see what I am talking about when you read it...see ya then!
- Meowyumm8mthReplied to Licorice
Mc: "I'm iron one"🗿
I smiled and then felt my body falling over, exhausted and out of Qi. Only for a moment did I realize that my face had fallen on her naked chest before I passed out.