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Darlz_4454

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  • Darlz_4454
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    She’s gonna do something stupid

    "I will return to your parents in the morning," Kayla answered. 
    The Knight's Mysterious Maid
    History · Violet_167
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Not Jace being shocked by everyone’s interactions with each other. 😃 Just accept it bro

    Not too far, Jace was dumbfounded at their interaction.
    The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Wow, that’s brutal but well deserved.

    But then, the next thing Cane did was to rip his mouth apart. Very slowly, so Alpha Gill could feel his cheeks being torn apart inch by inch.
    The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
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  • Darlz_4454
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    She’s aware she’s pregnant with her mate’s child right?

    "Alpha Cane must be busy nowadays," Laluna said, once again, their conversation ended up with talking about her mate.
    The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
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  • Darlz_4454
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    What a supportive mate 😂

    Sensing Cane pushing himself away from the bed, Redmond thought he would come to his aid, but instead, he went to the fireplace and grabbed the stoker. "Here, use this. Or else, you will only hurt your hands."
    The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Smart man.

    Will flinched when he heard the task that Cane gave to the sorcerer. He knew, who Cane meant by 'her'. It was Princess Osana, the Alpha wanted Haco to torture her again tonight during the new moon, surely Cane had something in his mind to do it at the same time of his transformation into his lycan form.
    The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
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  • Darlz_4454
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    I have no doubt Ethan will be able to teach her more effectively

    Ethan was seething. He was not happy. "I will teach her how to ride and you will see, under my tutelage, not just a horse, she will be even able to ride a dragon!"
    The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
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  • Darlz_4454
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    "You could stand before me with a lack of clothing, and it would not stir anything inside of me. I see you as a child in a woman's body. Stomping your feet on the ground when you do not get your way. You are a beautiful woman who will make it hard for your husband to stay away from you, but that man is not me. I wish to be far away from you. I would rather be at war than deal with your childish behavior," said Rafael.
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Yeah, but he still didn’t buy it for you.

    Delilah knew that, but the dress coming from Rafael made it special. None of the dresses she could buy for herself would be as great as the one bought by Rafael. What was so hard for him to understand?
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  • Darlz_4454
    Darlz_44545mth
    Replied to bumba_jander

    She very well might be

    Aria fiddled with the small needle between her fingers in her pocket.
    The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
    Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Check the spelling of Giselle in the last line

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  • Darlz_4454
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    I don’t mean to be rude but there are so many grammatical and spelling errors thus far, the story seems really interesting but I’m having a hard time continuing.

    For some reason, I could understand animals. I know what language they speak and they could understand me as well. I don't know how it happened but I realised I could speak to speak to them ever since I was a kid. I first knew about this in school. The teacher had gotten a guinea pig for an experiment but it suddenly spoke in my mind in a terrified voice, asking me to save it which I did.
    HIS CHOSEN MATE
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Should it be, ‘…trying to find my father amidst …?

    I trudged into the snow trying to find my father admit the chaos happening around me. I couldn't find him anywhere and I was starting to get far away from the house. I didn't stop, I just continued walking till I found myself in the woods.
    HIS CHOSEN MATE
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  • Darlz_4454
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    "I don't think all of them could be called relationships. Just a mutual understanding. Only a few have gotten married. What is happening here?" Logan asked, looking ahead at someone laying on the floor. They were right in front of Rafael's study. 
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Posted

    Really great character development. Love the description of setting, it make you so immersed in every detail.

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  • Darlz_4454
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    Let’s see how long this lasts 😂

    "Seeing you doubt me makes me want to prove you wrong even more. I will hold my tongue. I will not speak to Rafael or his mother as I please and I will be kind to all the other maids. I will not have bad thoughts about Mavis," Annalise said, but she knew the last one would take some time. "I will not be viewed as a strange woman. I will fall in line with everyone," Annalise promised.
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Should it be ‘chuckle’ and not ‘chuckled’ ?

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  • Darlz_4454
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    Oohh. First chapter and I already love Annalise

    Ch 1 The young master returns (1)
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  • Darlz_4454
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    Seems like Iris has some kind of power based on her reaction to the magic stone.

    Ch 22 NEW MOON
    The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
    Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep
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