Great.. I like the friendship bonds between zonish and irsha.. I guess zonish will tell her brother bout what shan told her 😏

I love it so much .. I wish you more success 🌹. The expessions that you wrote are perfect.. You describes The feelings of the characters well.

Wow wow wow. .. Tbh i fell in love with Rayan hahaha he is jealous 😁.. Mashallah you are talented huni .. Keep going

That's so amazing tho .. I love your way how to describe zonish's feelings. . M so proud of you qiqi❤. .I feel like zonish is you lol. Go on👍🏻