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Daoist_cool

Daoist_cool

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2023-09-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_cool5mth
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    This book has a great story that keeps you interested.

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    Eternal Temptation: Awakening Sinful Desires
    Eastern · Slow_down
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  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_cool5mth
    Commented

    Anything is okay but if a guy is emotionally attached to someone for 3 years and suddenly getting separated is not something that can be ignored. Author you didn't give a MC any character. lack of depth in MC's character won't show any prospects to novel, even more if it's first chapter.

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  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_cool5mth
    Posted

    The start was good even with many grammar mistakes and sometime currency mistakes.But after MC killed nephew of Godfather, novel went from streaming with system cheat and making money to full time supernatural powers activities with little to no use of appraisal powers. even when fighting MC will use appraisal after being forced back in the corner. The writing style changed too much because of AI based editing. It kills the wibe and makes the situation unnecessarily deep with forced big synonyms words, it just feels forced.

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    Live Stream Treasure Hunt: I Made Profits Million Times Over
    Urban · Red_Skin_Duck
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  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_cool5mth
    Replied to RAMINATOR

    The author just changed everything after killing the nephew of the Godfather. he went from streaming with a system cheat novel to a supernatural powers action genre.

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    Live Stream Treasure Hunt: I Made Profits Million Times Over
    Urban · Red_Skin_Duck
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  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_cool7mth
    Posted

    here for good read and that's just what I got.

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