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YEAH NOPE PURE TOXICTY! to manny draw cards. and fun fact troyiama actually stated that graceful charity, card of sanctity, and pot of greed were limited in the yugioh universe before being banned in 5ds universe. why do you think no one played it after gx.
Welp it already to late Yjna to stop involving herself in the yugioh timeline beacuse the allies and enemeys are adapting and evolving faster than they should. I hope Yuna realizes things are getting worse beacuse of her involvement and has a arc about it.
I love that you are using dream mirrors since it was Sarina's deck. my only complaints. Creature swap you choose which cards your opponent gets not the other way around. Neither the the anime nor manga did this. and during battle royal duels where you interact with you for the card you choose which one is affected by certain cards like card exchange, creature swap, and spell of pain. not everyone is affected. That means Sartorius could only choose Kabia or his sister to trade with. Also during a battle royal duel, no one can attack on their first turn. meaning sartorius could not attack with dream mirror black knight. finally, if this was a battle royal tag duel no one would share life points. they would have their own separate life points. if it is a regular tag duel where they shared a field they would.
though you may think it was a good thing Yuna went with kabia it's actually bad. Now Kabia doesn't have Critas, Alister now wont be able to hijack the plane to reunite kabia and yugi, There is so much that could have been avoided IF SHE LET THE STORY GO ON NORMALLY!!!
I got some complaints. I feel like it's a cop out not showing us the other turns. When you could made ten thousand dragon summon when you skipped those turns. Second I feel it was also a cop out that thousand bypass ras Phoenix mode. You could have made it attack masked beast. In all honesty I thought you were going to have yuna summon maat since its summoning requirement needs a light dragon and a light dragon and yuna might uses something like the starry knight cards to summon it and it is a god in the yugioh gx manga. I believe if you want to improve this series you should stop skipping duels and turns, and write more duels between other characters that aren't yuna, yugi, or kabia. You should expand your horizons and think about other chacters as well.